A Dog's Prayer
A doggy asks for the Lord's help16 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
I suppose everybody, animal, place and thing is entitled to prayer. Great oveall presentation. Nice visual imagery. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Cute poem.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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I suppose everybody, animal, place and thing is entitled to prayer. Great oveall presentation. Nice visual imagery. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Cute poem.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much. Rox
Comment from royowen
I remember when English cities were like this, London particularly, but I think they've alleviated it by correcting exhaust emissions I think. Beijing and a couple of other cities in China aren't, good, prevailing winds help. A lovely request from the dear dog Rox, also an excellent post, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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I remember when English cities were like this, London particularly, but I think they've alleviated it by correcting exhaust emissions I think. Beijing and a couple of other cities in China aren't, good, prevailing winds help. A lovely request from the dear dog Rox, also an excellent post, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Pollution is much better in the US as well. I never see smog in Florida anyway. Thanks so much Roy.
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That's good
Comment from Marie Foster1
Simply delightful. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I really can see life from a dog's perspective. Being inside is never fun...or at least not usually. That monster smog has got to go :)
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Simply delightful. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I really can see life from a dog's perspective. Being inside is never fun...or at least not usually. That monster smog has got to go :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Smog has lessened in CA, which is where Harley lives with my bro. I never see any in Florida. This was very fun to write. Thanks so much Marie. Rox
Comment from patcelaw
Nice concept for a poem about a dog praying. I like the flow and the rhyming. May your April bring wonderful blessings and warmer temps.
Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Nice concept for a poem about a dog praying. I like the flow and the rhyming. May your April bring wonderful blessings and warmer temps.
Patricia
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much Pat. Rox
Comment from Sally Law
This is so sweet and fun. I see it's in a club conttest or challenge of some sort. I keep telling myself I will get involved I'm these things one day. My first days in Florida were filled with underground fires called--muck fires. My mom almost hauled us backed to Georgia. She was a basket case until the smoke cleared.
All my best,
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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This is so sweet and fun. I see it's in a club conttest or challenge of some sort. I keep telling myself I will get involved I'm these things one day. My first days in Florida were filled with underground fires called--muck fires. My mom almost hauled us backed to Georgia. She was a basket case until the smoke cleared.
All my best,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Yes this is a club. It's an easy one and you only have to do what you like, I'm in two and just write for the themes I want to so no pressure. Yes the Muck Fires. Our first year here we had them too. Had never heard of such a thing. Have not heard about any since and will be here 20yrs in July. Thanks so much Sally. Rox
Comment from Shirley McLain
Is he a California dog? Great poem that I enjoyed reading. Wording and rhyming were good. I did not see a thing about your poem that needed correcting. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Is he a California dog? Great poem that I enjoyed reading. Wording and rhyming were good. I did not see a thing about your poem that needed correcting. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Yes, Harley is a CA dog. She is also a little wiener dog, but they didn't have any cute wiener dogs praying. =} She and her sister Sadie live with my bro and are so funny. Thanks so much Shirley.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem/prayer from a dog's heart. During the cold weather our pets are held inside but they are not use to be in confined places, I can just imagine how badly he wants to go play outside.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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A very well-written poem/prayer from a dog's heart. During the cold weather our pets are held inside but they are not use to be in confined places, I can just imagine how badly he wants to go play outside.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Harley and her sister Sadie love to be outside and chase lizards. They live in CA so can be outdoors most of the year. They are also little wiener dogs, but they didn't have a cute one praying so I chose this picture. Thanks so much Sandra.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Henderson Nevada was an industrial city when I moved to Nevada. Still is I suppose, but luckily the wind blows a lot and cleans the air. However when the wind didn't blow the air had a metallic taste I can recall today and it is probably still happening, but I do believe the clean air act stopped it. Since I am on oxygen 24/7- I can tell you clean air is very important. Gasping for air is no joke. Everyone, even grandma's like to play in the out doors. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Henderson Nevada was an industrial city when I moved to Nevada. Still is I suppose, but luckily the wind blows a lot and cleans the air. However when the wind didn't blow the air had a metallic taste I can recall today and it is probably still happening, but I do believe the clean air act stopped it. Since I am on oxygen 24/7- I can tell you clean air is very important. Gasping for air is no joke. Everyone, even grandma's like to play in the out doors. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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No, smog would not be the friend of someone on oxygen. The smog has really cleared up in the big cities in CA. I don't see much of it now when I visit, which is nice. Henderson is now a lovely community and has everything. My bro would move there but he has kids who can't do anything for themselves even though they are 36 & 40. Very sad, so he won't leave them. His 40yr old son lives with him and has ever since he got married 5 yrs ago. His wife lives with her mom. Is that weird or what? They lived together for 7yrs got married and live apart. I have no idea. There are times I'm very glad I'm 3000 mls away. =} Thanks so much Nancy.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute prayer/poem you have penned about this little dog praying to the Lord about the scary fog and the harm it does to it's master. You used very cute and sweet words with a lovely and adorable picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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This is a very cute prayer/poem you have penned about this little dog praying to the Lord about the scary fog and the harm it does to it's master. You used very cute and sweet words with a lovely and adorable picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thank you Teri, it was very fun to write. =} Rox
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm not sure what sort of smog this little dog is in, but it sounds pretty bad and I hope he can be rescued, the art wok is cute and your words do it justice Roxanna, a sweet little poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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I'm not sure what sort of smog this little dog is in, but it sounds pretty bad and I hope he can be rescued, the art wok is cute and your words do it justice Roxanna, a sweet little poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much Dolly. Rox
