Please call me
Willing the phone to ring10 total reviews
Comment from LaRosa
Outside of the obvious that you meet all the requirements of syllables, etc., I love the way you take advantage of the words' moods and translate them into visual images. To be sad, alone certainly makes one prone to be prone as in reclined. Then the problem can be resolved with a simple 'reach out and touch someone' moment...CALL!
Great work, Lady.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Outside of the obvious that you meet all the requirements of syllables, etc., I love the way you take advantage of the words' moods and translate them into visual images. To be sad, alone certainly makes one prone to be prone as in reclined. Then the problem can be resolved with a simple 'reach out and touch someone' moment...CALL!
Great work, Lady.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Thanks
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1 poem, Please Call Me, has the right set up for syllables and reminds the lonely that a phone call can be like an intimate conversation a thousand miles away.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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This 1-6-1 poem, Please Call Me, has the right set up for syllables and reminds the lonely that a phone call can be like an intimate conversation a thousand miles away.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019
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Many thanks Bill
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about the times we feel alone and we wish our special friend will think about phoning us. Just before we give up, the phone rings.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about the times we feel alone and we wish our special friend will think about phoning us. Just before we give up, the phone rings.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks for the great review Sandra.
Comment from Louise Michelle
This brought back memories of when I was young and single. You did a good job with your well chosen words. They say a lot. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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This brought back memories of when I was young and single. You did a good job with your well chosen words. They say a lot. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks Lou x
Comment from Carla Trinklein
So many of us can relate to this. Beautifully written! In this day and age, with so much of life lived on social media, very few people take the time to phone their friends. Best wishes in the contest! Your words are well chosen.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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So many of us can relate to this. Beautifully written! In this day and age, with so much of life lived on social media, very few people take the time to phone their friends. Best wishes in the contest! Your words are well chosen.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Many thanks for the great review.
Comment from Kingsrookviii
I lie this and perhaps read more depth than intended, but I doubt it. I now how it is to wish for some people to call once in awhile, like my ids that do not; then again, those who never may again. Great little poem. Bruce.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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I lie this and perhaps read more depth than intended, but I doubt it. I now how it is to wish for some people to call once in awhile, like my ids that do not; then again, those who never may again. Great little poem. Bruce.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks a lot for the great review and super 6*
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Awwwww - such a sad, lonely poem. You must have the patience of a saint. Ha ha ha! I'd go live life and waiting for a call be darned! LOL Nothing here for me to suggest you consider improving upon. Best of luck in the contest and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Awwwww - such a sad, lonely poem. You must have the patience of a saint. Ha ha ha! I'd go live life and waiting for a call be darned! LOL Nothing here for me to suggest you consider improving upon. Best of luck in the contest and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Many thanks for the great review.
Comment from Randa Dayle
Don't feel sad...if I had a phone I'd call.. nice rhyme for the 1-6-1 poetry contest. I like the picture as well. It makes the perfect package.. Good luck! And have a nice day!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Don't feel sad...if I had a phone I'd call.. nice rhyme for the 1-6-1 poetry contest. I like the picture as well. It makes the perfect package.. Good luck! And have a nice day!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Many thanks for the grear review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write, and a phone call can cheer you up immensely! I wish you luck with the contest, my phone never rings andI like it that way, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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A poignant write, and a phone call can cheer you up immensely! I wish you luck with the contest, my phone never rings andI like it that way, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thanks Dolly.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. I like the flow of the piece and the emotional punch it packs in just a few words. I've had a relationship like that where I was the one waiting for the call. It was agony. Good job.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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This was a good read. I like the flow of the piece and the emotional punch it packs in just a few words. I've had a relationship like that where I was the one waiting for the call. It was agony. Good job.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Many thank Chas.
