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Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Bucketlist Well done with this sevenelle you cover all bases or soles and love your image. I love stilettos and wear them if I can with a nice dress. Have also suffered with blisteres, and cramped feet fo my vanity LOL Well written with a good meter Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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Hi Bucketlist Well done with this sevenelle you cover all bases or soles and love your image. I love stilettos and wear them if I can with a nice dress. Have also suffered with blisteres, and cramped feet fo my vanity LOL Well written with a good meter Cheers Christine
Comment Written 29-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2019
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I think most women have suffered foot problems
in order to look stylish. I am too tall for stilettos, but I still enjoy seeing them worn by others. Thank you so much for your complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You certainly covered some ground with these shoes Trish, variety, uses, price. I'm not a shoe junky but I know a lot of women are. Your Sevenelle is well rhymed though your meter, (that dreadful word) is not quite right. eg the second line in your refrain couplet is a bit long.
Hope this was helpful trish,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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You certainly covered some ground with these shoes Trish, variety, uses, price. I'm not a shoe junky but I know a lot of women are. Your Sevenelle is well rhymed though your meter, (that dreadful word) is not quite right. eg the second line in your refrain couplet is a bit long.
Hope this was helpful trish,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 27-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Thank you Pearl for your great review and tip. Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh this was certainly me when I was in the "defense contractor world" and had the money for it!! :) ;) Absolutely loved this poem, Trish, it's bright and it's entertaining and, in so many ways, it's so true!! :) ;) Thank you for sharing your talents in such a lovely and unusual write, ma'am! :) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Oh this was certainly me when I was in the "defense contractor world" and had the money for it!! :) ;) Absolutely loved this poem, Trish, it's bright and it's entertaining and, in so many ways, it's so true!! :) ;) Thank you for sharing your talents in such a lovely and unusual write, ma'am! :) :) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write and I love shoes and have too many pairs! They are all over the place and just can't stop buying them! The last line of the first stanza has an extra (it), love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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This is a fun write and I love shoes and have too many pairs! They are all over the place and just can't stop buying them! The last line of the first stanza has an extra (it), love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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MThanks so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Me too, until the foot problems began!
Comment from damommy
You certainly covered shoes very well, all kind of them and their functions. I know some women can't ever have enough.
You have excellent rhyme in this poem, but forgive me for pointing out you need a little work on your meter.
I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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You certainly covered shoes very well, all kind of them and their functions. I know some women can't ever have enough.
You have excellent rhyme in this poem, but forgive me for pointing out you need a little work on your meter.
I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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You?re forgiven, meter is my fear and nemisis! Thanks for your compliments
Hugs, Trish
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You might take a class with Pantygynt. I've taken a couple, and they're a big help. 8-)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Bucketlist. The piece had a lot of "sole" in it. Sorry, had to say it. The flow of this one was good and I liked the imagery as well. Good job.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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This was a good read, Bucketlist. The piece had a lot of "sole" in it. Sorry, had to say it. The flow of this one was good and I liked the imagery as well. Good job.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Ha ha Chas Thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha