Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This piece stands as a perfect example in several instances of getting it wrong leading to getting it right. The only people who never fail are those who never try.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2019

Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and review.

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

You have shown bravery, courage, and resolve. To me, nothing shows success more than someone who refuses to stay down. You are the FS spokesmodel, and I congratulate you! Good luck in this contest. xo

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019

Dear Rachelle, Thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Hmmm this is so true...without failure there would never be true success...or empathy for others..
I tried harder ...I had an English teacher who told me I would never write.....and an art teacher who said I'd never paint...it made me work harder
God bless

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

Dear kiwijenny, Thank you for your comments and review.

Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

I like this story. It has a compelling tenor that shows the theme of the contest. It is a good thing failure is needed because failure is what I do best! No matter how I proofread, something always goes wrong. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019

Dear Miss Sherry, Thank you for your comments and review.

reply by Miss Sherry on 23-Mar-2019

You are most welcome!!

reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019

Dear Fan Storian, thank you for your comments and review and good luck wishes.