This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Veronica Talks to Gladys"Third book in the time travel trilogy
32 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAH! This is great. I could picture it completely. Also, I just loved this line: "If it was possible for a ghost to pale, Gladys did just that." That's classic. VERY funny!! Onto the next!! This is irresistible! xo
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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HAHAHAH! This is great. I could picture it completely. Also, I just loved this line: "If it was possible for a ghost to pale, Gladys did just that." That's classic. VERY funny!! Onto the next!! This is irresistible! xo
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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LOL you are such a brilliant reviewer. You can come again with my next book! LOL. xxxxxxxx
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You don't have to ask me twice!! xo
Comment from wordsfromsue
Sandra, I'm guessing you had a bit of fun when writing this chapter. :-)
Quite enjoyable to read about The Toad getting some of his comeuppance.
I like the question hanging in the air with the last sentence, regarding a naval attack.
Very good chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Sandra, I'm guessing you had a bit of fun when writing this chapter. :-)
Quite enjoyable to read about The Toad getting some of his comeuppance.
I like the question hanging in the air with the last sentence, regarding a naval attack.
Very good chapter. :-)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Hi Sue, Thank you so much for this lovely review and all the stars! Yes, I did, it was great fun, and it will get funnier over the next few parts. The Toad will be a tad upset!! Big hugs, dear friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Rhonda Skinner
Very well written. I hope you had as much fun writing this as I had reading it. I really liked this line; Her face was a mixture of pity and disbelief. Good job!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Very well written. I hope you had as much fun writing this as I had reading it. I really liked this line; Her face was a mixture of pity and disbelief. Good job!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you so very much, Rhonda, for the lovely 6 stars and fabulous review. I really appreciated your wonderful comments. Big hugs, my friend.:) Sandra xx
Comment from Gail Denham
Interesting fantasy really - not sure what they plan to do to the old man - extinguish him entirely eventually? But that's the rest of the story. I did miss Mildred - a neat character.
Was that book by H.G. Wells written in 1938? Just wondering.
Interesting read - good job.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Interesting fantasy really - not sure what they plan to do to the old man - extinguish him entirely eventually? But that's the rest of the story. I did miss Mildred - a neat character.
Was that book by H.G. Wells written in 1938? Just wondering.
Interesting read - good job.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Mildred will be back soon. :)) They have to stop the Vice Admiral changing history and also want to have him put away for murdering his wife, Gladys. HG Wells book The Time Machine was published in 1895. Thank you so much for continuing to follow my story and the kind review. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A really good chapter, Sandra,
as Gladys and Ver. are together.
-It flows well from one event to the next,
beginning with an explanation to Gladys.
-Good use of The Time Machine!
-Gladys is receptive, and I wouldn't
be surprised to see her practicing
with Ver. in the near future!!
-She is impressed with what Ver. was
able to do to so that Charles was gobsmacked!
-At the end, you bring the story back
to the real problem at hand.
-The serious work is yet to come.
-Extra stars since I don't have 6 real ones!
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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-A really good chapter, Sandra,
as Gladys and Ver. are together.
-It flows well from one event to the next,
beginning with an explanation to Gladys.
-Good use of The Time Machine!
-Gladys is receptive, and I wouldn't
be surprised to see her practicing
with Ver. in the near future!!
-She is impressed with what Ver. was
able to do to so that Charles was gobsmacked!
-At the end, you bring the story back
to the real problem at hand.
-The serious work is yet to come.
-Extra stars since I don't have 6 real ones!
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much, Pam, for this lovely review. I'm so pleased you liked the way I explained things to Gladys and adding The Time Machine, lol, who knows, that might have been written on his experiences! :)) Veronica has many ideas she's going to use on him, and she's also come up with another name that suits the Vice Admiral better. I'll see if you notice. As for the 6, those giant ones at the bottom are far brighter! Thank you again, dear friend. Big hugs, :) Sandra
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You are very welcome and deserving, Sandra. A great chapter. You never know with H.G. what he might have done!
I will look forward to the new name, and more shenanigans. Did you like my "gobsmacked" comment?! I am glad you liked the bright gold stars, too. And how about this huge reply font?!
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I certainly did notice the 'Gobsmacked' Lol, you are beginning to sound a lot like my characters!! LOL! :)) xx
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They rub off on me! Wait til you see what else is up my sleeve!!
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
Fun with Ghosts and Time Travelers, what could be better?
I think Gladys being a ghost makes it quite reasonable that Veronica could
be a time traveler.
Nice plug For H G's book. It adds a little weight to the traveler theme.
Charles might be a little tougher nut to crack, but a nut is a nut.
An ominous ending to the chapter,
but never fear when Veronica is near.
Excellent work, my friend
Alas, no sixes left.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Hello Sandra,
Fun with Ghosts and Time Travelers, what could be better?
I think Gladys being a ghost makes it quite reasonable that Veronica could
be a time traveler.
Nice plug For H G's book. It adds a little weight to the traveler theme.
Charles might be a little tougher nut to crack, but a nut is a nut.
An ominous ending to the chapter,
but never fear when Veronica is near.
Excellent work, my friend
Alas, no sixes left.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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I wondered what was happening when I saw this new layout. Tom's been making some more changes!
Thank you so much, Robert for another wonderful review, receiving six stars is nice, but your review means so much more, so absolutely no problems there.
I must admit, I enjoy writing the ghosty bits most, but the planning has to come into it. That has been the hardest part of this story. Now Veronica has to do her bit, and it's going to be such fun. Thanks again, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from sandragee
I find it amusing that Gladys, who is a ghost, at first finds the idea of time-travelling hard to believe. But she soon becomes a true-believer, and together with Veronica and Mildred, she will be a part of an invincible team. It's always satisfying when a bad guy gets what he deserved. I am rubbing my hands in glee. Hopefully this is the beginning of the end of the vice admiral.
Good job.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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I find it amusing that Gladys, who is a ghost, at first finds the idea of time-travelling hard to believe. But she soon becomes a true-believer, and together with Veronica and Mildred, she will be a part of an invincible team. It's always satisfying when a bad guy gets what he deserved. I am rubbing my hands in glee. Hopefully this is the beginning of the end of the vice admiral.
Good job.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Yes, this is the beginning of the end of our vice admiral. But he is a tough nut to crack. Thank you for this lovely review, Sandra, I'm really chuffed that you enjoyed this part. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from JDRBAR
Aw, this chapter was just tooooooo short. I wanted to keep reading. Not fair. This is going to be a fun read until Charles is taken care of. Love it. Hurry with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Aw, this chapter was just tooooooo short. I wanted to keep reading. Not fair. This is going to be a fun read until Charles is taken care of. Love it. Hurry with the next chapter.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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LOL, there was more than 1600 words in this part. I never know when to stop. The next part will be a long one too. Thank you so much for the lovely review, and all those bright 6 stars, my friend, I'm so surprised to see anyone with any left on a Friday!! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Joy Graham
Hi Sandra,
I think I have missed reading a chapter or two of this story. I apologize for falling behind. I got my cortisone shot in my hip yesterday so hoping I will get back into a somewhat of a routine. The next few days I have to take it easy so reading and reviewing should fit into my schedule quite well. At least I have good intentions. The weekend might mess that up.
I enjoyed reading this chapter and look forward to the next one. I saw no spag issues today.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Hi Sandra,
I think I have missed reading a chapter or two of this story. I apologize for falling behind. I got my cortisone shot in my hip yesterday so hoping I will get back into a somewhat of a routine. The next few days I have to take it easy so reading and reviewing should fit into my schedule quite well. At least I have good intentions. The weekend might mess that up.
I enjoyed reading this chapter and look forward to the next one. I saw no spag issues today.
Joy xx
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Oh, I quite understand, Joy. Those cortisone injections are so painful, I am never sure which is worth suffering at the time. You rest up and do as your doctor tells you. Not to worry about missing a chapter it's just nice to know you still enjoy the story. You take care, my friend. You will soon be up and practising for the next marathon!! Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from kiwijenny
Then Mildred. I reminded her how she was flummoxed when she realised she could see and talk to us.
Then Mildred. Isn't a sentence.
This was a great piece of writing. You had me intrigued. I loved Gladys's reaction. Her husband must have been awful.
And the ending keeps us hanging.
God bless
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Then Mildred. I reminded her how she was flummoxed when she realised she could see and talk to us.
Then Mildred. Isn't a sentence.
This was a great piece of writing. You had me intrigued. I loved Gladys's reaction. Her husband must have been awful.
And the ending keeps us hanging.
God bless
Comment Written 22-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much, Jenny, I have no idea what happened there! I've sorted it now, Glady's husband was awful, and he was the one who murdered her and got away with it, so she will be very pleased to see him punished. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
