Abandoned cars
No-one left to drive them home13 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is not only a haunting image it is also very sad and all too true.
You have captured the emotion of fear well here in so very few words, Anonymous Poet.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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This is not only a haunting image it is also very sad and all too true.
You have captured the emotion of fear well here in so very few words, Anonymous Poet.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2019
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Thanks Dean
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Comment from Mark D. R.
This poignant verse memorializes the tragedy they just occurred in New Zealand.
'War no more' should be '(automatic) guns no more!'' We would then live in a more peaceful world.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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This poignant verse memorializes the tragedy they just occurred in New Zealand.
'War no more' should be '(automatic) guns no more!'' We would then live in a more peaceful world.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Too right. Thanks for reviewing Mark.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Heavenly Father, grace the hearts of the world with power to pray earnestly for our Muslim brothers and sisters. We are one brotherhood, let not anger and misguided
hatred win. No child should die for something his little hand had no part in. This is a wonderful contest entry and I wish you luck!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Heavenly Father, grace the hearts of the world with power to pray earnestly for our Muslim brothers and sisters. We are one brotherhood, let not anger and misguided
hatred win. No child should die for something his little hand had no part in. This is a wonderful contest entry and I wish you luck!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thanks Miss Sherry
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I saw them and it is so tragic what happened, innocent people worshipping in peace and then this happens, my hear goes out to the victims families, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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I saw them and it is so tragic what happened, innocent people worshipping in peace and then this happens, my hear goes out to the victims families, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thanks Dolly
Comment from LisaMay
Topical and tragic. Living in NZ as I do, this monostitch really spoke to me with its poignant image of the cars waiting for their drivers, who will never arrive.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Topical and tragic. Living in NZ as I do, this monostitch really spoke to me with its poignant image of the cars waiting for their drivers, who will never arrive.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thanks for your comments LisaMay. I am so sorry for the suffering in your country. I think this has hit the whole word very hard.
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Out of the tragedy such an outpouring of support is heartening. Doing an atrocity in peaceful NZ is like pulling the heads off kittens.
Comment from JudyE
This really hit home. I hadn't thought about such a happening but I'm sure there would have been a lot of abandoned cars. Your entry should do well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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This really hit home. I hadn't thought about such a happening but I'm sure there would have been a lot of abandoned cars. Your entry should do well. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thank you Judy.
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your Monostitch: 2 contest entry is sad because cats are not feral but they are abandoned. Beautiful picture but sad thought!
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
Your Monostitch: 2 contest entry is sad because cats are not feral but they are abandoned. Beautiful picture but sad thought!
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 19-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Monostich poem about the cars that stand abandoned after the massacre at the mosque in New Zealand. A very true but also extremely sad story.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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A very well-written Monostich poem about the cars that stand abandoned after the massacre at the mosque in New Zealand. A very true but also extremely sad story.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thanks a lot Sandra. Much appreciated.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent, timely one line poem
that touches on the sadness that permeates the world.
A stark reminder of the underlying tremors of hatred.
Respectful done
RS
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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You've written an excellent, timely one line poem
that touches on the sadness that permeates the world.
A stark reminder of the underlying tremors of hatred.
Respectful done
RS
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thank you so much.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is quite a unique take on the monostich contest. It is a powerful write that brings readers up short, pointing up the finality for now 50 innocent victims.
Best of luck and thanks for sharing.
Jan
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is quite a unique take on the monostich contest. It is a powerful write that brings readers up short, pointing up the finality for now 50 innocent victims.
Best of luck and thanks for sharing.
Jan
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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This was inspired by a news item that I read today about cars in the car park of the mosque. Thanks for reviewing.
