Arrangement of Birds
Sight-reading music on the power lines.16 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
This is quite funny :) I'm a music person and have seen this picture before. You give it new life. Kind of like an electric piano. Or maybe like doing face to face online? Congratulations on winning this contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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This is quite funny :) I'm a music person and have seen this picture before. You give it new life. Kind of like an electric piano. Or maybe like doing face to face online? Congratulations on winning this contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Thanks, Joy ... maybe it is jazz, the notes are all over the place!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
The words roll together very nicely here -musically, in fact- even though an arpeggio isn't notated the way these birds are sitting. Still, I like the effect of the picture with the poem. I bet it will do very well in the contest. Good luck to you. xo
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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The words roll together very nicely here -musically, in fact- even though an arpeggio isn't notated the way these birds are sitting. Still, I like the effect of the picture with the poem. I bet it will do very well in the contest. Good luck to you. xo
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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You know too much about music! and I don't, hence the incorrect position of the birds. They just would not sit still when i was trying to get them arranged right on the wires. And they kept crapping on me as I was standing beneath them.
Actually, I wrote this with you in mind, because of your music abilities and having read your story immediately before I wrote it.
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Except you're running away with the contest! So who REALLY knows what she's talking about (hint: YOU) and who's just chattering away (hint: the other person in this conversation..)?! xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved this inventive nature write, and why don't birds get electrocuted? Is it because they are not earthed! He he he, your words are brilliantly penned and this is my favourite, so you get my vote, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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I loved this inventive nature write, and why don't birds get electrocuted? Is it because they are not earthed! He he he, your words are brilliantly penned and this is my favourite, so you get my vote, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Thanks, Dolly, you are so kind. (and funny)
Comment from LyndaS
Well this was just the most clever thing I have seen here in a long time. It takes an exceptional brain to look at this art and see musical notes. I totally loved this post and who ever you are, I encourage you to take the road less traveled and then show us what you find. This is terrific and I wish you luck in this contest. Well done!!!!!! Lynda
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Well this was just the most clever thing I have seen here in a long time. It takes an exceptional brain to look at this art and see musical notes. I totally loved this post and who ever you are, I encourage you to take the road less traveled and then show us what you find. This is terrific and I wish you luck in this contest. Well done!!!!!! Lynda
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Hi Lynda,
thanks so much for your awesome review. You made me feel great!
Believe me, I always try to take the road less travelled... the view is better and there are fewer bothersome people!
Life on the edge is where the challenge and the beauty is.
All the best to you,
Peace. LM
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your contest restricted text and selected illustration are perfectly 'in sync' with each other, but I can't name that tune in 1 note (-;
like especially:
arrangement ...
... arpeggio
humming
your author's notes
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Your contest restricted text and selected illustration are perfectly 'in sync' with each other, but I can't name that tune in 1 note (-;
like especially:
arrangement ...
... arpeggio
humming
your author's notes
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Thanks for your most generous review, Mark.
I think it might be jazz??
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This looks like such a familiar site round here these days -- and it is NOT very harmonious!! :) :) LOL! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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This looks like such a familiar site round here these days -- and it is NOT very harmonious!! :) :) LOL! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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That is a shame about the disharmony... and they are probably crapping on people below as well!
Thanks for your review and good wishes.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha ha! This is a great poem and an excellent contest entry. You are truly seeing, with an artist's eye, versus just looking at the world around you. Good luck and thanks for sharing.
Jan
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Ha ha ha! This is a great poem and an excellent contest entry. You are truly seeing, with an artist's eye, versus just looking at the world around you. Good luck and thanks for sharing.
Jan
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
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Looking and noting in this case.
Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of all your syllables in this creative, well-written
5-7-5. They DO look like sheet music. I see such scenes when I'm
out walking; the birds make me think of a business meeting.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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You have made effective use of all your syllables in this creative, well-written
5-7-5. They DO look like sheet music. I see such scenes when I'm
out walking; the birds make me think of a business meeting.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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Maybe its a business meeting about music?
Thanks for your review, Janice.
Comment from fm wright
A wonderful 5-7-5. Your picture goes so well with this beautifully written poem, which flows effortlessly from line to line in one complete thought. Best of wishes with this contest entry!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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A wonderful 5-7-5. Your picture goes so well with this beautifully written poem, which flows effortlessly from line to line in one complete thought. Best of wishes with this contest entry!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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Thank you very much for your lovely review and good wishes. I'm pleased that you liked it.
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I very much liked it!
Comment from TPAC
I feel the intent in this write, wondering if it suffers needing a more enhance conveyance, falling myself short of rendering that view. I found this an interesting perspective about birds. All in my opinion of this work.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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I feel the intent in this write, wondering if it suffers needing a more enhance conveyance, falling myself short of rendering that view. I found this an interesting perspective about birds. All in my opinion of this work.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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Thanks for taking the time to review my poem. It's as good as I can make it! I noticed the birds and I am interested in music, so the 2 ideas came together when i saw the birds on the wires.
