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An Egg for Breakfast

A Rondeau Prime

29 total reviews 
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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A lovely light-hearted Rondeau Prime about a great way to start the day. I quite agree - porridge is indeed a stodgy goo -
love the smiley face eggs. Nice one Dolly,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2019
    Glad you liked this one Valda, eggs are a joy, thanks for your review, love Dolly x
Comment from Sally Law
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Amen! I ear eggs almost every day. Love them and really quite good for you.mi eat the embroidered kind with stamp on them, as my husband call them. The yolk is much needed for my eyesight loss.
All my best and very well done, as always. Not the egg, but the poem...
Sal xo

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thank you Sally for your review, eggs are great aren?t they? He he he, love Dolly x
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Dolly,

LOL. Don't kids eat eggs anymore? The "stodgy goo" sounds awful. I vote for eggs. Ha ha!

As always, nothing here to edit.

Thanks for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    He he he, you made me smile Jan, porridge is actually good for you, but eggs are better, thank you for your review, love Dolly x
Comment from Bichon
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A very warm and nice poem. I enjoyed reading this simplistic one, I hope you enjoy your eggs for breakfast haha. I haven't had one in ages, I've become addicted to pancakes whoops!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2019
    Thank you for your review of this fun filled poem, much appreciated, ?go to work on an egg!?, love Dolly x
Comment from sfharper
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lol, this must be in defiance of the newspaper report on eggs. It shows the health and reason for eggs and why you like them. It is happy and light for children and is inspirational. I enjoyed reading it, good form and rhyme.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thank you for your reivew, there?s nothing wrong with an egg! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment from Marlene Shinn Lewis
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Oh, fun read! And nutritionally I agree with an egg (or two) a day! This would be a great promotion for the Egg Council! Well crafted poem; I'm looking forward to more of your writing.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thank you Marlene for your review, yes I shall have to sent them this poem, love Dolly x
Comment from donette1914
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outstanding!!!!
very clever use of your words that draws ones in and that takes talent.
The photo goes well to make this come to life.
It was a pleasure to read you're fine well-penned work.
I hope for the best in the contest
donette1914 3/16/2019

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thank you Donnette for your review, glad you liked this one, love Dolly x
Comment from Rickie1
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Dolly

Cute fun poem. It just caught my eye after eating a fried egg, cheese and bologna on toast. My wife had oatmeal. Thanks for the smile.

Rickie

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thank you Rickie for your review, glad you still enjoyed your breakfast! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment from Jmf4119
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Great rondeau poem Dolly. Eggs for breakfast is a perfect way to start the day. Protein that will hold you until lunch. We love omelettes and that gets the day started off just right.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thank you Janet for your review, glad you like eggs! Love Dolly x
Comment from lyenochka
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I agree - an egg is full of protein and despite all that false advice about the cholesterol in the 1980's, now it's the best thing. Enjoyed the happy beat and good message! I still prefer granola. Lol.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Yes, eggs had bad press and yet they used the champion everything about eggs at one time. I eat them, thank you for your review, love Dolly x