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I've Got Class

Minute Poetry

25 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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Good luck in the class, Melissa. A very nice poem about your class. From what I see of your work, this should be a piece of cake for you. Just enjoy yourself. Marilyn

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
    Thank you very much, Marilyn. Much appreciated!!

    Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good image, Melissa.
-Notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your poetic musings
about Pantygynt's class.
-Hope you enjoy it,
and learn new things.
-I hope you pass, too,
and learn about
"the swank new norm."
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    Haha.. Thank you very much, Pam!

    Melissa
reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Mar-2019
    You are very welcome, Melissa. Since you gave Pantygynt a nickname, don't you need one, too, and maybe everyone taking the class- a new trend on FS!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    haha.. I guess, I would be Sugar! LOL

    Melissa
reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Mar-2019
    That is funny; didn't stop to think about it!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written minute poem about having classes on FanStory to learn meter and rhyme. It should be great fun and there is always something new to learn.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Sandra. I am really looking forward to it.

    Melissa
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Good luck Melissa on taking one of Pantygynt's classes. I keep meaning to do one too but time, in general, is hard pressed so I think I would let myself down as well as the teacher. I look forward to reading what you have learned. Thank you for sharing this fun and lighthearted minute. Good luck! ~DD

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    Thank you, DD. I a really looking forward to it. Wish you were in the class too!!!
    Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh kudos to you, Melissa, for taking Jim's class. I'm sure you'll learn loads as I always learn from his reviews and posts. I know you'll do great because you are so courageous in practicing so many different poetic forms!

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Helen. I am really looking forward to taking this class. I will let you know how it goes.

    Melissa
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
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Oh great! So you're taking an on-line class on FS? Let me know how it goes! Glad you have the time to devote to this Melissa. I like your title, picture and words - they all work together well.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Thank you Kathleen. I have not taken a class on FS before, so this is a first for me. I do know that these classes are on Tuesday and Friday at 5:00 p.m. Eastern, so that is not too bad. I am really looking forward to it. Thanks for the review.
    Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This well-written, appealing minute poem reveals the talent of a poet who already knows how to rhyme--and therefore doesn't need to learn the skill! :-)
Love the artwork

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Janice. I have been writing since the Christmas of 2017 and there is so much I do not know about poetry and using words... when I read the comments about the deeper meanings (slant rhymes, syntax, feminine endings, etc.), I just feel stupid... maybe I can learn something from Jim. I am looking forward to the class.

    Melissa
reply by Janice Canerdy on 14-Mar-2019
    I realize we all have room to learn, but your minute poem is really good!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Hey, Hey, Hey!! Good for you, Melissa -- we all look forward to the fruits of your learning! :) :) Thanx for this minute today and have a great Friday ahead! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Thank you, Yvette. I am looking forward to this class. You have a great weekend, you hear!!

    Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
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Good luck on the class, Melissa. I need to take some classes but in an other direction. Hope Jim is a good teacher but knowing you and how you rhyme you'll be teacher in no time. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Thanks so much, my friend! I am really looking forward to this class!!

    Melissa
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Well. Melissa, I know you can rhyme as demonstrated here. Good job with your minute poem. The lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and meter. The message is clear, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2019
    Thank you very much, Jan!!

    Melissa