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clever mortician

senryu contest

26 total reviews 
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is clever, very clever. I love the excellent wording and word choices here. This was very well thought out. Crystal glass coffins and remains to be seen. Brilliant! I enjoyed this very much. Well done! You should do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
    Thank you Jeffrey for your encouraging review. So glad you enjoyed it. It did win in the contest which is rare for me. :))))
    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from kiwijenny
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Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ...I love puns...
This one had a certain cemetery...oops symmetry
And if anyone had a bone to pick with the mortician...they could see what to pick/..lol
God bless

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    LOL!
    Thank you for your fun and funny review.

    This was also fun to write.

    Blessings
    Janet

Comment from susand3022
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OMG Author!!! My niece would absolutely LOVE this!!! She's a mortition... currently a hostess... lol She should be a mortition. She looks enough like a mortition to be a mortition... maybe that's why she's a hostess!

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    LOL!
    Thank you for your fun and funny review.

    This was also fun to write.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from humpwhistle
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Clever? Maybe. Confident, surly.
I've never warmed up to 'viewings'. Some find comfort. I'm different.
I like your brashness.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
    Thank you for review. My husband doesn't do viewings well either. He says however that people will come to his just to make sure he is really dead. haha He is a great guy with a different sense of humor.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from royowen
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A very clever entry in this senryu poetry contest. I like the ambiguous play on words that sets this apart, and says a darn sight more than the mere words, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019

    Thank you for your encouraging review Roy

    This was different for me and fun to write and it actually won. yay.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by royowen on 16-Mar-2019
    Well done Janet
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A great play on words here and I enjoyed this clever write and wish you well with the contest, it's a winner for me, best wishes . . . . .love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2019

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019

    Thank you for your encouraging review Dolly

    This was different for me and fun to write and it won. Yay!

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 16-Mar-2019
    You got my vote too!