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Comment from Possummagic
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Beautifully, lovingly created. I am feeling warmth from your words because I know that I am given a choice in this life. No, not one choice but many and my life is governed by those choices. So therefore Dear Lord I pledge to try my very hardest to do what is good and right to do in my life and be kind and gentle to those around me. Amen.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2021

Comment from amada
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Very good for the soul, this great piece of writing. It has something for everyone, believers and non believers. Your style is fast, rapid, it denotes passion. This is a great q1uality for a writer. I wish you the best.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

Comment from Leann DS
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He makes His Plan for each life but you are the real doer of your life. Believe in God. Try to know His plan for your life. Act according to His Plan, and if you do, you will make an immortal mortal or good stand of life, for God will help you all the way till you leave your temporary living on this gifted land He Gifts to you.

This part is so significant in that it talks about free will. When I think about the meaning, I get goosebumps. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs and blessings to you.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

Comment from Aaqib Naeem
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Thank you for sharing this thought provoking piece. You have left me with much to ponder upon and try and figure out for myself. All of the messages in your words have a hint of truth to them.

And if God speaks to you then you are blessed indeed! I wish I could say the same as well.

Thank you for sharing this and have a good day!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

Comment from Wendy G
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Your style of writing is quite unique - and so it should be, for there is no right or wrong way to express one's self. Your ideas are thought-provoking, especially because they are accompanied by repetition and lists to reinforce the themes you want us to think about. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2021

Comment from Norm Valentine
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Nice statement of faith and life with God being in charge. I also like the graphic. And, of course, choice is very important to life's decisions. Choose well.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2021

Comment from Susan Larson
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This is beautifully written and certainly good sound teaching for everyone. I especially like "He gifts you a life with a soul. You are free to choose, maintain and make a good life." I see that sometimes Gifts is capitalized and sometimes not. Is it intentional?

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2021

Comment from Patty Palmer
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Your post reminds us all that how we live our lives will determine whether or not one day we will dwell with the house of the Lord when our earthly time is done. We are all in charge of our own lives. Our God is a forgiving God and He understands what is in our hearts always. He is there, omnipresent, we just need to follow Him and try realize that He has a plan in place for each of us, if we only listen. He knows our most intimate thought and loves us despite of it, and it's okay for us to whisper back.
Patty

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2021

Comment from Begin Again
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He gifts you a life with a soul. You are free to choose, maintain and make a good life. ... I choose to take away this thought from your story. God has forgiven us for our trespasses; yet gives us the choice to determine which path we follow and what we do with his gifts. So many want to blame others but the choice actually lies in our hands. Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2021

Comment from samandlancelot
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Al,

Of course, God whispers to you. He speaks to His friends, and His friends know His voice.

I think this would be more effective without your last paragraph. It seems repetitive, and your second-to-the-last paragraph contains a powerful message for a good ending.

Patricia

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2021