Our Time
A cinquain poetry contest offering14 total reviews
Comment from Ms. Snyder
I love the way you just put down the teaching hat (beautiful teacher) and mosey over to the CQ hat - LOL - real quick like - hopefully, you will have more chapters that have some of this included in them down the road between some of the characters in your book. I like the feeling this Cinquain poem offers the reader. It is almost as if I am getting ready to just enjoy my evening with a special someone in the lovely back yard while some nice food is grilling away on the barbeque. I can put my feet up and just relax with a person that I enjoy having around. MRW I would just like to know do you have a secret corner of the Internet for pictures... 'Cause you seem to find some extraordinary ones for sure! Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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I love the way you just put down the teaching hat (beautiful teacher) and mosey over to the CQ hat - LOL - real quick like - hopefully, you will have more chapters that have some of this included in them down the road between some of the characters in your book. I like the feeling this Cinquain poem offers the reader. It is almost as if I am getting ready to just enjoy my evening with a special someone in the lovely back yard while some nice food is grilling away on the barbeque. I can put my feet up and just relax with a person that I enjoy having around. MRW I would just like to know do you have a secret corner of the Internet for pictures... 'Cause you seem to find some extraordinary ones for sure! Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Well, Beautiful Lady, as I have said before, my writing is my escape!! So, yeah, it is a quick hat switch....or, as it would be more aptly put, I sit on the teacher hat for a bit - LOL! ;) Thanx for your review on this one! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from flylikeaneagle
pen pal: beautiful photo and message.
It's great to share our hearts dreams together.
I like watching the sunset and stars.
Hope you win. We're getting more snow soon.
flylikeaneagle Stars for you ***********
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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pen pal: beautiful photo and message.
It's great to share our hearts dreams together.
I like watching the sunset and stars.
Hope you win. We're getting more snow soon.
flylikeaneagle Stars for you ***********
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Oh, Nancy -- it is so good to hear from you and THANK YOU for those wonderful stars! :) ;) Oh, yeah -- do enjoy sunsets and stars....be sure to keep an eye on them for me until all these crazy clouds clear down here -- I will join you just as soon as I can!! :) :) LOL! :) Be sure to take a snap of the snow and write us a short poem about it so that I can see some...it's not happening here this year....just rain, rain, and more rain! :) ;) Take care, my pen pal, and have an awesome weekend! :) ;)
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YM Roger: feel free to fly into my site and you'll
see plenty of snow photos. LOL! We are getting
more snow this weekend. flylikeaneagle
Comment from Kimberly Maschi
Excellent poem. Beautiful, unique, mood setting, loving, inspiring, and comforting. I very much enjoyed this piece. I think the picture fit this poem so well. If I was in any doubt of what this poem was about, the picture helped. Good luck in the contest!
-Kim
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Excellent poem. Beautiful, unique, mood setting, loving, inspiring, and comforting. I very much enjoyed this piece. I think the picture fit this poem so well. If I was in any doubt of what this poem was about, the picture helped. Good luck in the contest!
-Kim
Comment Written 08-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, Kimberly -- much appreciated! :)
Comment from sfharper
Sunset seems to always be a thing in itself, I like how you use it to frame something deeper going on with another person, it makes it very romantic. The reader is able to step into the feeling with the closing line. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Sunset seems to always be a thing in itself, I like how you use it to frame something deeper going on with another person, it makes it very romantic. The reader is able to step into the feeling with the closing line. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping in on this one, SF -- much appreciated! :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This one just melted me. Beautiful words, so loving and sweet, and a perfect picture to accompany it. This one wins my vote (and it was the last one I read, too. That metaphoric "Saving the best for last!" Good luck! Remember this, though, please: Whether it wins or not, it's still a fantastic poem. So good, in fact, I'm going to bookcase it. xo
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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This one just melted me. Beautiful words, so loving and sweet, and a perfect picture to accompany it. This one wins my vote (and it was the last one I read, too. That metaphoric "Saving the best for last!" Good luck! Remember this, though, please: Whether it wins or not, it's still a fantastic poem. So good, in fact, I'm going to bookcase it. xo
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Oh, Rachelle, thank you so very much for these wonderful comments -- I am just thrilled that you truly enjoyed my poem as much as I enjoyed writing it.....you know, it was just one of those that as soon as the first word, sunset, was on the paper, the rest just came out!! ;) ;) Thank you, thank you for your support and for your appreciation -- be sure to stop by after the contest is over and hang out for a while .... would love to have you around the place! ;) :) Take care and have a wonderful weekend! ;) ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your Cinquain is full of promise and anticipation of what there is to come and there is a warm sunny glow to your words, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Your Cinquain is full of promise and anticipation of what there is to come and there is a warm sunny glow to your words, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thanx for stopping by for the review, Dolly -- much appreciated. :) ;) Have a great evening! :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinqauin poem about sunset and the realization that we can spend much more time together with our loved one. To watch the sunset together is priceless.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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A very well-written Cinqauin poem about sunset and the realization that we can spend much more time together with our loved one. To watch the sunset together is priceless.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thanx for stopping by for the review, Sandra -- much appreciated. :) ;) Have a great evening! :)
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
Oooooh - this is a lovely poem and a great contest entry that should be a strong contender. Your verse leave lots to the imagination and is effectively complemented by the gorgeous image you've selected to display. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
Oooooh - this is a lovely poem and a great contest entry that should be a strong contender. Your verse leave lots to the imagination and is effectively complemented by the gorgeous image you've selected to display. Best of luck in the competition and thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thanx for stopping by for the review, Jan -- much appreciated. :) ;) Have a great evening! :)
Comment from patcelaw
This writing is warm and expressed with great beauty. I enjoyed the reading of it. May your week be blessed with joy, peace and love.
Patricia
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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This writing is warm and expressed with great beauty. I enjoyed the reading of it. May your week be blessed with joy, peace and love.
Patricia
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thanx for stopping by for the review, Patricia -- much appreciated. :) ;) Have a great evening! :)
Comment from Michele Harber
What a beautiful and romantic poem, perfectly following the Cinquain Poetry rules (assuming, of course, that you're counting "hours" as a two-syllable word; I consider it one syllable, but I know others beg to differ). Between the picture and the words, you set a lovely and peaceful mood and tone around the sunset and all it holds in store.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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What a beautiful and romantic poem, perfectly following the Cinquain Poetry rules (assuming, of course, that you're counting "hours" as a two-syllable word; I consider it one syllable, but I know others beg to differ). Between the picture and the words, you set a lovely and peaceful mood and tone around the sunset and all it holds in store.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thanx for stopping by for the review, Michele -- much appreciated. :) ;) Have a great evening! :)
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It's my pleasure, and you have a nice evening as well.
