I'm Free at Last
In your loving arms52 total reviews
Comment from called2rite
There is so much to digest from this eloquent poem. I like the way the way of alternating the rhyming of each line. keep up the good work. comment made on 3-7-19 by called2rite
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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There is so much to digest from this eloquent poem. I like the way the way of alternating the rhyming of each line. keep up the good work. comment made on 3-7-19 by called2rite
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from djeckert
A fine sonnet, filled with much truth. I love the line "But if I choose the world and not your crown
and let these daunting quandaries win the day,
then I'm no better than the ones who frown ". It says so much. God surely Blesses!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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A fine sonnet, filled with much truth. I love the line "But if I choose the world and not your crown
and let these daunting quandaries win the day,
then I'm no better than the ones who frown ". It says so much. God surely Blesses!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. Thank you too for sharing your favorite lines.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Louise Michelle
Faith is so important to get us through difficult times. You did such a nice job, perfect meter and great rhyme choices. Just a pleasure to read. Regards, Lou
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Faith is so important to get us through difficult times. You did such a nice job, perfect meter and great rhyme choices. Just a pleasure to read. Regards, Lou
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you Lou for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from JudyE
I really enjoyed your sonnet thanks. The rhythm is very cadenced with no sudden unexpected syllables to trip up the reader. Because of that, it flows really well and I'm happy to give it 'exceptional' status. There is no way I could improve it.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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I really enjoyed your sonnet thanks. The rhythm is very cadenced with no sudden unexpected syllables to trip up the reader. Because of that, it flows really well and I'm happy to give it 'exceptional' status. There is no way I could improve it.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you Judy for your encouraging and thoughtful review and the extra special sixth star rating.
I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dawn Munro
*sigh....* This is such a lovely sonnet, my friend. It's so good to read you again -- I'm sorry I have missed as much as I have of your work. I will try to remember to visit more often. Best of luck with this beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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*sigh....* This is such a lovely sonnet, my friend. It's so good to read you again -- I'm sorry I have missed as much as I have of your work. I will try to remember to visit more often. Best of luck with this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review .
I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
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Blessings to you. :)
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO JMF 4119: In answer to your prayer here: Gods answer to you is: "COME NOW,"
NOW. Let us reason together, though your sins be as scarlet, they shall be as white as snow;
though they be red like crimson, they shall be as wool." ISAIAH, chapter 1: and at verse 18.
Duchess, you are right. You cannot change what's happened in the past. Because what, Jesus did in the past changed it already. Jesus died to set you free. And who ever the Son sets free...is free indeed. God bless you, Duchess. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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HELLO JMF 4119: In answer to your prayer here: Gods answer to you is: "COME NOW,"
NOW. Let us reason together, though your sins be as scarlet, they shall be as white as snow;
though they be red like crimson, they shall be as wool." ISAIAH, chapter 1: and at verse 18.
Duchess, you are right. You cannot change what's happened in the past. Because what, Jesus did in the past changed it already. Jesus died to set you free. And who ever the Son sets free...is free indeed. God bless you, Duchess. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you Rhonnie for your encouraging and thoughtful review .
I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful image and nice presentation, Janet.
-This was a very well penned sonnet.
-Congratulations on the second place finish.
-The requirements of a sonnet
are very well met.
-I like the idea in the beginning,
leaving your fault to Him.
-You continue the theme, as you offer
thanks for help in troubled times.
-An excellent volta, and concluding couplet.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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-Beautiful image and nice presentation, Janet.
-This was a very well penned sonnet.
-Congratulations on the second place finish.
-The requirements of a sonnet
are very well met.
-I like the idea in the beginning,
leaving your fault to Him.
-You continue the theme, as you offer
thanks for help in troubled times.
-An excellent volta, and concluding couplet.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Pam for your encouraging and thoughtful review and the extra special sixth star rating.
I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome and deserving, Janet. I don't think there was a flaw in your sonnet!
Comment from rspoet
Hello Janet,
You've written a very fine sonnet with all the attributes of the Shakespearean form:
rhyme, meter, Volta, reflective couplet.
The message is strong and the couplet uplifting.
The only line that causes a little hitch was line ten with "quandaries."
I read it with three syllables, though some might squeeze it down to two.
Shakespeare often condensed words - quand'ries.
Great picture and presentation.
No sixes left, but I wish you well in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Hello Janet,
You've written a very fine sonnet with all the attributes of the Shakespearean form:
rhyme, meter, Volta, reflective couplet.
The message is strong and the couplet uplifting.
The only line that causes a little hitch was line ten with "quandaries."
I read it with three syllables, though some might squeeze it down to two.
Shakespeare often condensed words - quand'ries.
Great picture and presentation.
No sixes left, but I wish you well in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you Robert for your encouraging and thoughtful review . A virtual six from you is as good as having one. :))))
I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Paula Marie
Wonderful poem and the words are ever so true! God's love is the only thing that will heal us and that will see us through! A truly inspiring message!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Wonderful poem and the words are ever so true! God's love is the only thing that will heal us and that will see us through! A truly inspiring message!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you Paula for your encouraging and thoughtful review.
I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Green_Jello
That love that Jesus has for us outweighs all our sins if we so choose to make Him Lord of our lives. You have captured thoughts perfectly and though we can't undo the sins we have already committed, we can ask for His guidance so we don't do thoss things again! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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That love that Jesus has for us outweighs all our sins if we so choose to make Him Lord of our lives. You have captured thoughts perfectly and though we can't undo the sins we have already committed, we can ask for His guidance so we don't do thoss things again! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review.
I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
