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Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Human's are Suffering "Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Human suffering is evident, across the world, in dimensions of living, in each occupation, trade, calling, profession or practice, politically, socially and in terms of rights; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing! -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Human suffering is evident, across the world, in dimensions of living, in each occupation, trade, calling, profession or practice, politically, socially and in terms of rights; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing! -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
When everyone cries out that they are suffering, then it will be that nobody will be suffering....too bad the voices that cry the loudest are the ones that usually don't know the true meaning of 'suffer'. Good luck at the polls! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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When everyone cries out that they are suffering, then it will be that nobody will be suffering....too bad the voices that cry the loudest are the ones that usually don't know the true meaning of 'suffer'. Good luck at the polls! ;) ;)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and your time to read this submission.
God's Blessings to you.
Comment from JudyE
Certainly the world seems to be in turmoil at the moment, even more so than it was just a few months ago. In the last verse 'truely' should be spelt 'truly'. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Certainly the world seems to be in turmoil at the moment, even more so than it was just a few months ago. In the last verse 'truely' should be spelt 'truly'. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you for catching my oversight and for the review. I will correct the spelling shortly. God's Blessings to you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have highlighted the great suffering in the world here and we need to show compassion and help where ever we can to elevate the suffering, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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You have highlighted the great suffering in the world here and we need to show compassion and help where ever we can to elevate the suffering, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the review and Good Luck wishes, God Bless you.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Poet,
As you found in your research, each human has their own level of suffering. Those who are well off, find things to suffer from which are as important to them as the beggar on the street who just wants a decent meal.
A resourceful beggar held a sign the other day that said, 'Dreaming of a cheeseburger.' I gave him the $2.50 it would cost to cross the street to get a Whopper at Burger King. Did he use it for that? Not my concern. My need was to help him.
Thank you for sharing your poem and entry for the contest. Good luck to you,
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Dear Anonymous Poet,
As you found in your research, each human has their own level of suffering. Those who are well off, find things to suffer from which are as important to them as the beggar on the street who just wants a decent meal.
A resourceful beggar held a sign the other day that said, 'Dreaming of a cheeseburger.' I gave him the $2.50 it would cost to cross the street to get a Whopper at Burger King. Did he use it for that? Not my concern. My need was to help him.
Thank you for sharing your poem and entry for the contest. Good luck to you,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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A summary of the internet search on the topics for Human Suffering.. Thank you for the review and compliments.
Comment from 24chas
This was a very effective piece, unknown writer. It's a bit overwhelming when you start talking about suffering in this world. I think you're correct in your last lines. Nice job.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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This was a very effective piece, unknown writer. It's a bit overwhelming when you start talking about suffering in this world. I think you're correct in your last lines. Nice job.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks for the review and compliments a tough field to compete in with tougher contestants.
