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Extended Family

Moving on is stressful.

5 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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Great job formatting this script. I think I like the Anna character best. But I'm lost as to what these characters look like, how they are related to each other, age etc. So a Cast List would be really helpful at the beginning. It was hard to guess who was "abandoned" as per the script contest theme.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2019

Comment from dmt1967
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This is a very good play. The start seemed a little flat but, by the middle, I was enthralled. I liked the spin as well about Benny. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2019

Comment from 24chas
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This was a good read, unknown writer. I liked it. You did well for your first attempt. The dialogue was snappy and good and the characters were well developed. Plus, the story was interesting. Good job.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2019

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Moving is hard. I can't imagine what it's like to a child to have to do it. Especially if you're leaving you friends. My best friend moved here in middle school. I'm so glad I met her but I will never know what was going through her head in a new school and having to make new friends and all of it. A little love in this story could go a long ways but I'm sure this is how it is in many cases

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019

Comment from Randa Dayle
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Very good for your first attempt. Great job, nice detail, and it was written in such a way that if I was the director, I would know exactly what you wanted! NICE!!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019