Moonbeams
Diatelle poetry16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This diatelle, Moonbeams, has the correct syllable placements and takes the readers on a journey into the fantasy cosmos and safely back to our slumbering mattresses.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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This diatelle, Moonbeams, has the correct syllable placements and takes the readers on a journey into the fantasy cosmos and safely back to our slumbering mattresses.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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Hey, Bill. I see you are rummaging around in the past... haha. Thank you very much for this review. Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, mystery poet. This is a lovely diatelle entry. I love it. It's so very magical. Nicely done! Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Hello there, mystery poet. This is a lovely diatelle entry. I love it. It's so very magical. Nicely done! Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 26-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you very much, Kerry.
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You're very welcome. So sorry for the late reply:))
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
A very lovely and expressive Diatelle!
Overall presentation is absolutely beautiful (font, artwork).
If it was intentional that you reduced the font size on the last 2 lines, that was brilliant! (NOTE: if the font size is not reduced, forgive me ... must be my old aging eyes playing tricks LOL)
I sincerely mean it when I say this is an excellent contest entry!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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A very lovely and expressive Diatelle!
Overall presentation is absolutely beautiful (font, artwork).
If it was intentional that you reduced the font size on the last 2 lines, that was brilliant! (NOTE: if the font size is not reduced, forgive me ... must be my old aging eyes playing tricks LOL)
I sincerely mean it when I say this is an excellent contest entry!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much, Gale!
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Truly beautiful!
Comment from MissMerri
A nicely written, most appealing Diatelle poem, whimsical and clever with such an imaginative theme. I enjoyed this very much. I think this form seems very difficult and I've yet to try one. You've managed it quite well.
~MM
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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A nicely written, most appealing Diatelle poem, whimsical and clever with such an imaginative theme. I enjoyed this very much. I think this form seems very difficult and I've yet to try one. You've managed it quite well.
~MM
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Adonna, for the lovely review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written diatelle poem about the moonbeams at night gathering our dreams on silvery beams of our imaginations set free while we lightly sleep.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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A very well-written diatelle poem about the moonbeams at night gathering our dreams on silvery beams of our imaginations set free while we lightly sleep.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Sandra.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
Your Diatelle poem is magical, serene, and perfectly soothing. A beautiful marriage of visual and emotive images. A pure delight to read and savor.
Thank you!
diane
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer,
Your Diatelle poem is magical, serene, and perfectly soothing. A beautiful marriage of visual and emotive images. A pure delight to read and savor.
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Diane!
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My pleasure! :)
Comment from Coco Jane
Neat, dreamy poem. I like "sleepy, fanciful schemes."
Maybe instead of "kept" use a juicier word like "hid" (yeah, not grammatical, but it fits and has only one syllable)--or "hidden away" instead of "kept far away" or "hidden" instead of "and kept." Just a thought; the poem is great as is.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Neat, dreamy poem. I like "sleepy, fanciful schemes."
Maybe instead of "kept" use a juicier word like "hid" (yeah, not grammatical, but it fits and has only one syllable)--or "hidden away" instead of "kept far away" or "hidden" instead of "and kept." Just a thought; the poem is great as is.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Hello, Coco Jane. What a lovely review and great suggestions too. I will pop over and look at it with your thoughts in mind. Thanks so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A journey of light in these words here and I enjoyed the ride, I liked: "drowsy milky way", I wish you luck with the diatelle contest, best wishes . . . . Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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A journey of light in these words here and I enjoyed the ride, I liked: "drowsy milky way", I wish you luck with the diatelle contest, best wishes . . . . Love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
WOW!! This one just FLOWS. The imagery is beautiful, and I love the way it just whisks the imagination away immediately. Fantastic job! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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WOW!! This one just FLOWS. The imagery is beautiful, and I love the way it just whisks the imagination away immediately. Fantastic job! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much!! I really appreciate your lovely review.
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
Great picture for a wonderfully, dreamy poem! I really enjoyed your choice of words and how the horses eat stardust hay. This writing is so relaxing and makes me want to go to bed sooner than later! And how the moonbeams gather dreams in silver sleighs!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Great picture for a wonderfully, dreamy poem! I really enjoyed your choice of words and how the horses eat stardust hay. This writing is so relaxing and makes me want to go to bed sooner than later! And how the moonbeams gather dreams in silver sleighs!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Kathleen.
