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Rhyming Block

When you just can't rhyme!

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Comment from Vicki Ziemer
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What a cute little poem. It looks like you are getting back in the mood to rhyme again. A rhyme about not being able to rhyme is a very good way to clear out the cobwebs and get back on track. I hope you don't have to resort to a laxative.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2019


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2019
    Thank you Vicki, so far, no laxative has been needed. =}
Comment from jmdg1954
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Ha ha... you had me at laxative!

Ruts will always happen
Just have to persevere
With your pen hitting the paper
It will all be in the rear.

See a little tie in to the laxative theme...


Don't worry all will be well soon enough... John


 Comment Written 22-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Yes, that is very clever. =} Thanks so much John.
Comment from nancyjam
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I know this feeling. I was in a slump for a few months but it seems to have passed.
I hope your muse returns. Meanwhile you are on the right track with this humorous piece. It is fun to read and I'm sure will resonate with many.
Good luck,
Nancy

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2019
    Yes, I think it happens with all of us. Thanks so much Nancy.
Comment from Treischel
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I love that cartoon. Made me smile. Your clever Rhymed Couplets were delightful too. Writers block can be depressing. Hope you get over it soon. Kick that Muse of yours in the rump. Then that depression , you can dump. Lol. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
    Thanks so much. I'll try kicking my muse =} Rox
Comment from LisaMay
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Let's hope the laxative is beneficial for your mouth orifice rather than the other one!!
Just keep writing even if you feel uninspired because, as has happened here, you have penned a delightfully rhyming poem!

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
    Laxative are just no fun, so I don't I'll take any. =} Thanks so much! Rox
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Roxanne, I think a lot on here will relate to your poem...I know I do...I have so much going on around me...I don't want to do anything...and know I have to...sigh...I had to laugh at your picture...and I think it is coming back...this poem says so...I love your poem sweet girl...and loveee this picture...very well written...love you Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much Linda. How are you? Good I hope. Rox
reply by l.raven on 21-Feb-2019
    your so welcome Rox...I am doing well...I hope you are too...this getting old stuff isn't all it's cracked up to be...LOL...have a wonderful evening...love you...xxoo
Comment from seaglass
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ha,ha,ha, this cartoon made me laugh. Your poem and it's wording sounds like a long ago written lament. It is well rhymed and has great possibilities for the contest. I can't imagine you ever being in block mode.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
    I was kinda amazed myself that I was able to do this after not feeling at all like writing, but I guess not wanting to write inspired me somehow. Who'd have thought. =} Thank you so much. Rox
Comment from Janet Foor
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I too hope these feelings pass for you. However, you have written a fun poem that I think every writer can identify with as we all have writers block from time to time.

Hang in there - you are right, this too shall pass.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much Janet. Rox
Comment from dragonpoet
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These are silly rhyming couplets that show that your fight with writer's block is now over. This poem includes all the emotions the roam around in your head when you can't write. Yes, some writers are missed when they don't write for a long time, just like you said at the end of your poem. There is just a slight bit of tough in cheek pride here.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
    Thank you so much. I wonder, do you write about dragons? =} Rox
reply by dragonpoet on 21-Feb-2019
    You are most kindly welcome, Rox. Yes. I write about all kinds of mythological creatures.

    Joan
Comment from Gail Denham
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This too shall pass. Surely. Writers' block is probably a misnomer. It's writer apathy and it hits us all. One reason I like Fanstory is for the prompts, for reading the work of others, for the thoughts and encouragement. It helps me being -- and then once the first words are written, the poem often takes off. Thank the Lord for that.
Good reminder. Thanks for the poem.

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 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2019
    Yes there is lots of encouragement and ideas given on here. It's a great place to be. Thanks so much Gail. Rox