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9 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great choice of topic Trish for your bridge free verse with the time between conception and death being the bridge of life, the to and fro. Enjoyed your words, and what about the pictured bridge, whoa you wouldn't get me on that one.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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Great choice of topic Trish for your bridge free verse with the time between conception and death being the bridge of life, the to and fro. Enjoyed your words, and what about the pictured bridge, whoa you wouldn't get me on that one.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2019
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Thanks again for your reviews,they are appreciated
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Bucket,
Ooooh - I really like this poem. And the image you've selected complements your verse absolutely perfectly. It's definitely about a journey that we cannot turn back from. Nothing I can see here to suggest improving upon in your verse; however, your visual presentation might be improved if you delete some empty, blue space from the bottom following your last stanza. Thanks so much for sharing with us. Jan
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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Hi Bucket,
Ooooh - I really like this poem. And the image you've selected complements your verse absolutely perfectly. It's definitely about a journey that we cannot turn back from. Nothing I can see here to suggest improving upon in your verse; however, your visual presentation might be improved if you delete some empty, blue space from the bottom following your last stanza. Thanks so much for sharing with us. Jan
Comment Written 07-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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You honor me with your positive reviews, thank you so much. Unfortunately I cannot delete any of the blue- I don?t have a clue how,
Hugs, Trisha
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Hi Its easy. Pull up.your release. Click edit. Scroll down past text & backspace or use delete key to desired effect. I hope that helps.
:-)
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a very beautiful metaphor for life. I love the word undulations and the artwork you've chosen to go with your poem.
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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This is a very beautiful metaphor for life. I love the word undulations and the artwork you've chosen to go with your poem.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2019
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It?s good to hear from you, Maria. Thank you so much for your kind review.
hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
Outstanding poem, Trisha. It may be my favorite of yours. Your poem is gritty. My favorite line is that "some stay on given time." That is everyone's hope alright, and that is too short. I like the bridge concept, and I like that you start it with conception and not birth. Your photo is breathtaking. It certainly emphasizes life's ups and down and travails.
Nice job. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Outstanding poem, Trisha. It may be my favorite of yours. Your poem is gritty. My favorite line is that "some stay on given time." That is everyone's hope alright, and that is too short. I like the bridge concept, and I like that you start it with conception and not birth. Your photo is breathtaking. It certainly emphasizes life's ups and down and travails.
Nice job. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you from my heart. Your reviews are always so positive, and that motivates me more.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from JudyE
Comparing life to a bridge is a great analogy and you've carried the comparison through to the end. Certainly it's a one-way street - or bridge, isn't it?
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Comparing life to a bridge is a great analogy and you've carried the comparison through to the end. Certainly it's a one-way street - or bridge, isn't it?
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thank you for a positive review.
hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a very well-written piece. Thought provoking, yet full of wisdom. You're so right, some are taken to soon while others stay for awhile. I believe the reason for this is that we all have a purpose and when it's fulfilled we move on to the other side. Your artwork is beautiful, perfect for your poem. I imagine going across that bridge would be breathtaking and scary.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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This is a very well-written piece. Thought provoking, yet full of wisdom. You're so right, some are taken to soon while others stay for awhile. I believe the reason for this is that we all have a purpose and when it's fulfilled we move on to the other side. Your artwork is beautiful, perfect for your poem. I imagine going across that bridge would be breathtaking and scary.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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I love your pseudonym
Comment from patcelaw
Sometimes our lives are like covered bridges and other are like suspension bridges. Yet as we cross for time to time we can be secure in knowing that God is our bridge to Heaven
Patricia
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Sometimes our lives are like covered bridges and other are like suspension bridges. Yet as we cross for time to time we can be secure in knowing that God is our bridge to Heaven
Patricia
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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How true, thank you for your heart felt kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from KyColonel Randal
The illustration you have chosen is aesthetically pleasing and compliments your subject matter. I would consider toning down the brightness of your blue background. I see this is a piece written for a club activity. Thank you for sharing this piece.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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The illustration you have chosen is aesthetically pleasing and compliments your subject matter. I would consider toning down the brightness of your blue background. I see this is a piece written for a club activity. Thank you for sharing this piece.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your kind review, I will consider your idea, but no promises!
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A unique analogy as we cross the bridge of life from birth to death and the struggle and fight in between. As you say some get there too soon, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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A unique analogy as we cross the bridge of life from birth to death and the struggle and fight in between. As you say some get there too soon, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019
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Thanks Dolly, it was my bridge back from the fears of cancer to my friends and poetry.
Hugs, Trisha