Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
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Comment from JudyE
Goodness, that's a lot of 'h' words. I couldn't really make it make sense but that's probably my fault rather than the fault of the poem. I do appreciate the effort that has gone into this.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Goodness, that's a lot of 'h' words. I couldn't really make it make sense but that's probably my fault rather than the fault of the poem. I do appreciate the effort that has gone into this.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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A bit of a babble but correctly composed.
I suppose.
Thanks for the review.
Comment from JanPerry
I don't know how you made all words "h". Well done on alliteration. Maybe you used the dictionary here.
I like heavens hell raisers. It's true, we have the dark place to end up if we cannot live a spiritual life. Words are all well chosen in your poem.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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I don't know how you made all words "h". Well done on alliteration. Maybe you used the dictionary here.
I like heavens hell raisers. It's true, we have the dark place to end up if we cannot live a spiritual life. Words are all well chosen in your poem.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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A slip up changed to hellions,
Thanks for catchingmy oversight.
Best Wishes
