Pix This 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Red Heart Horror!"art inspired poetry
15 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Well, even if it isn't romance, it's a fun and fine poem for this post of Picture This. Sorry I'm so late in reviewing it. We have to have a chuckle once in a while and your poem hit the mark with me. Good Job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Well, even if it isn't romance, it's a fun and fine poem for this post of Picture This. Sorry I'm so late in reviewing it. We have to have a chuckle once in a while and your poem hit the mark with me. Good Job. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Hi Marilyn :) Glad to bring you a chuckle! Thank you for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it as always, Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from trimple
Good morning to you, Debra
Oh blimey, this is priceless! LMAO
Such a funny and honest poem about all that cupcake slushiness we are supposed to pour into our heartfelt poems :)
Absolutely wonderful.
I feel exactly the same as you actually.
kind regards
and with a great big fat smile on my chops.
tracey
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Good morning to you, Debra
Oh blimey, this is priceless! LMAO
Such a funny and honest poem about all that cupcake slushiness we are supposed to pour into our heartfelt poems :)
Absolutely wonderful.
I feel exactly the same as you actually.
kind regards
and with a great big fat smile on my chops.
tracey
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this one, Tracey!
I had fun writing it... :) Debs x
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Oh, Deb. This was such a laugh :)
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Looks to me that you need someone to shatter your heart... and then spend their life putting that back together piece by piece, only keep on part and replacing it with a piece of their own, so you can always have a piece of each other! You heart breaker you! Think the lyrics to stupid cupid goes well with this poem! Like the alternative theme and the down to earth feel of this one :)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Looks to me that you need someone to shatter your heart... and then spend their life putting that back together piece by piece, only keep on part and replacing it with a piece of their own, so you can always have a piece of each other! You heart breaker you! Think the lyrics to stupid cupid goes well with this poem! Like the alternative theme and the down to earth feel of this one :)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Dale :) My heart has had it's share of knocks over the years, believe me!
I 'do' romantic (kinda!) but I definitely don't 'write' romantic...
Glad you liked this one :) Debs
Comment from Dawn Munro
AAAAAaaaaaaaaHAHAHAHAHA! Oh goodness, Debra, what a fun poem. The minute I saw the title and that lovely big, red heart, I KNEW it had to be one with a different slant. You should have entered this one! I LOVE it!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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AAAAAaaaaaaaaHAHAHAHAHA! Oh goodness, Debra, what a fun poem. The minute I saw the title and that lovely big, red heart, I KNEW it had to be one with a different slant. You should have entered this one! I LOVE it!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Dawn, for your warm and encouraging feedback. Glad you enjoyed the poem! Best wishes to you as always, Debra :)
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from RichardFann
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Debs,
Fab poem, so funny.
Just as well you didn't post the bare original.
In fact, a Bear poem may have been better!
Love is:
She: "Darling I just reversed the car through the shed."
He: "Never mind Dear, it needed fixing anyway."
Your poem did dingle my bell, metaphorically speaking.
Thanks for the laughs,
Richard.
PS: Realise now why the bear is so popular.
It's Freudian!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Debs,
Fab poem, so funny.
Just as well you didn't post the bare original.
In fact, a Bear poem may have been better!
Love is:
She: "Darling I just reversed the car through the shed."
He: "Never mind Dear, it needed fixing anyway."
Your poem did dingle my bell, metaphorically speaking.
Thanks for the laughs,
Richard.
PS: Realise now why the bear is so popular.
It's Freudian!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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LOL! Thank you Richard.... and for the shiny stars :)
Debs
Comment from Sally Law
But, you can write comedy. Still laughing...I'm not sure if I can finish this...side splitting laughter here. Hopefully, you found your way to the Hallmark card aisle. Don't forget the chocolate torte and sombrero. Your gonna need em. Times' a wastin.
All my best,
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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But, you can write comedy. Still laughing...I'm not sure if I can finish this...side splitting laughter here. Hopefully, you found your way to the Hallmark card aisle. Don't forget the chocolate torte and sombrero. Your gonna need em. Times' a wastin.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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LOL! Sally, I think I love you!
Happy Valentines Day, best wishes, Debra x
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See, you wrote a love line...that?s almost a letter or card. Just spit it out on paper and see what ya get. You might be surprised...
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:D x
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about your disablement to writh a romantic poem. You acknowledge the heart is romantic, but you cannot imagine a romantic scene with someone loveable to share a good evening.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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A very well-written poem about your disablement to writh a romantic poem. You acknowledge the heart is romantic, but you cannot imagine a romantic scene with someone loveable to share a good evening.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Hi Sandra, I often enjoy romantic moments with my lovable someone. I just don't 'write' romance!
Thanks for the feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from 24chas
Now, this was funny as sh**. And it didn't read like it. It was honest and heartfelt and I liked it. I think you've got a great sense of humor that comes through especially in this one.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Now, this was funny as sh**. And it didn't read like it. It was honest and heartfelt and I liked it. I think you've got a great sense of humor that comes through especially in this one.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Chas :)
Really appreciate the feedback, best wishes, Debra
Comment from Heather Knight
You've outdone yourself here. Maybe you cannot write romance poetry, but you are great at using humour in your poems.
This was a great read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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You've outdone yourself here. Maybe you cannot write romance poetry, but you are great at using humour in your poems.
This was a great read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Hi Maria :)
Thank you again for the wonderfully generous feedback and star award!
I appreciate you, best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well Debra this write is very entertaining and endearing, you don't need slushy poetry when it comes to the heart, your words are witty and punchy, with a great flow, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Well Debra this write is very entertaining and endearing, you don't need slushy poetry when it comes to the heart, your words are witty and punchy, with a great flow, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Dolly, for your kind words and encouragement. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
