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Chochee Medina Life and Times

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Comment from KyColonel Randal
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Thank you for sharing this poem. This is an interesting topic for a poetry contest. I like the related illustration and always appreciate informative author's notes. It would be a neat contest to have all participants highlighting a historical/cultural figure. Good luck with your contest entry!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and encouragement. I can imagine many interesting character selections here to write about it be interesting to see.
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Mystery Author,

This is very well done and well researched. I loved your author's notes, as I enjoy learning about a wide variety of topics, but I'm not certain it conforms to the 5-7-5 contest guideline. (But that's for a committee or someone above my proverbial pay grade.)

I enjoyed the read and it's well written. Nothing I can see to suggest improving upon.

Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!

Jan

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and Kind words.
    I've gone over it a few times for syllable count compliance. Any particular words you can point me to would be helpful and greatly appreciated.