Our Friend Michael Cahill
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "A Poet's Heart of Gold"Prose or Poetry
13 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Hello sweet poet. I found you again at last. Mike (Walkerman) told me about your fine poetry and your bridal gown alterations for infant burial. I lost my granddaughter on this day in 2013. I just posted the story if you would like to read it. I am predominantly a prose writer of short works, but dabble in poetry. I am enjoying poetry more and more. I am sorry for no six is mine. This is by far and away worthy of a six. Your tribute to Michael Cahill was simply outstanding. He was a wonderful friend to many here on FanStory.
All my best,
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
Hello sweet poet. I found you again at last. Mike (Walkerman) told me about your fine poetry and your bridal gown alterations for infant burial. I lost my granddaughter on this day in 2013. I just posted the story if you would like to read it. I am predominantly a prose writer of short works, but dabble in poetry. I am enjoying poetry more and more. I am sorry for no six is mine. This is by far and away worthy of a six. Your tribute to Michael Cahill was simply outstanding. He was a wonderful friend to many here on FanStory.
All my best,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 06-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Hello Sally! So sorry for this very late reply! Thank you for reading and for your lovely words. I am sorry to hear about your grandaughter and I will head over to your page soon to read. Yes, "Sweet Send Aways" is a organization started by a friend in memory of her son that passed. I am on of the seamstresses. I have my own loss and It has been a bit of a healing process. We have a room at Children's Hospital here in Milwaukee. It is a beautiful room where parents can view/choose/keep as many items as needed. Everything is donated. Again, thank you for this review...I will be sure to read your works soon :-)
Comment from kiwijenny
I don't know why this poem showed up again because I know I have reviewed it before.
It is just as good as it was, a beautiful tribute to a friend of wit and charm.
Well penned and thank you for it
God bless
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
I don't know why this poem showed up again because I know I have reviewed it before.
It is just as good as it was, a beautiful tribute to a friend of wit and charm.
Well penned and thank you for it
God bless
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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You did...I had to change the name to get it into Mike's book...I somehow didn't get it right the first time...
Comment from rspoet
Hello Susan,
Michael is indeed smiling down... at your beautiful words :)
"A poet's heart of gold."
He will be missed, but also remembered
for kindness is forever.
Perfect choice of art work.
Simply beautiful...
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
Hello Susan,
Michael is indeed smiling down... at your beautiful words :)
"A poet's heart of gold."
He will be missed, but also remembered
for kindness is forever.
Perfect choice of art work.
Simply beautiful...
Robert
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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:-) thank you Robert.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written honor and tribute to Michael Cahill. Everyone was in shock when we heard the news the ones who know him well as well as those who cross his path a few times.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
A very well-written honor and tribute to Michael Cahill. Everyone was in shock when we heard the news the ones who know him well as well as those who cross his path a few times.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you Sandra.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your tribute to Michael. How wonderful to share such a special connection like that.
I hope sharing this helps you process the loss,
~MP~
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your tribute to Michael. How wonderful to share such a special connection like that.
I hope sharing this helps you process the loss,
~MP~
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you Patty.
Comment from LisaMay
I am missing him and I didn't even know him! I am new to FS and therefore have had no contact with him or his work, but clearly I have missed out on becoming acquainted with a caring, compassionate man. Your sonnet is a lovely testament to your friendship and heartfelt loss.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
I am missing him and I didn't even know him! I am new to FS and therefore have had no contact with him or his work, but clearly I have missed out on becoming acquainted with a caring, compassionate man. Your sonnet is a lovely testament to your friendship and heartfelt loss.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you lisa. Yes, he was a great friend to all.
Comment from Richard J
Ah, Dear Susan,
I cannot imagine a more gorgeously captivating picture you could have selected for this wondrously moving poem in homage to our beloved, passed, Brother Poet, Syr Michael Cahill.
Then, there is the heart gripping heavenly Sonnet you've, obviously, poured forth from your heart and soul upon the page for all to enjoy and marvel at with our every lonely fibre, and I'd love to see it presented beneath the picture for a better reading ease, but, nonetheless, I know it's perfection in every technical way, because You composed it for your Dear Irish Brother, whom I know read it as it flowed so radiantly from your ever skillful pen.
Thank you ever-so sincerely and warmly for sharing this beautiful piece, Dear Lady-Poet ... it brings such sweet solace to the heart! ~ Richard
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
Ah, Dear Susan,
I cannot imagine a more gorgeously captivating picture you could have selected for this wondrously moving poem in homage to our beloved, passed, Brother Poet, Syr Michael Cahill.
Then, there is the heart gripping heavenly Sonnet you've, obviously, poured forth from your heart and soul upon the page for all to enjoy and marvel at with our every lonely fibre, and I'd love to see it presented beneath the picture for a better reading ease, but, nonetheless, I know it's perfection in every technical way, because You composed it for your Dear Irish Brother, whom I know read it as it flowed so radiantly from your ever skillful pen.
Thank you ever-so sincerely and warmly for sharing this beautiful piece, Dear Lady-Poet ... it brings such sweet solace to the heart! ~ Richard
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you Richard for yet another outstanding review! Michael will certainly be missed around here. I am not completely happy with the format..but I couldn't change it as this is in a book series.It will have to do. The format is different from what I would normally do. Thanks for reading and for this wonderful review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Mastery
Excellent memorial poem for Michael, Susan. We will all miss the decent human being he was.
"Eyes searching far above for Whom provides ...
to witness, then, your spirit glorify."
Thanks for sharing. Bless you, Bob
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
Excellent memorial poem for Michael, Susan. We will all miss the decent human being he was.
"Eyes searching far above for Whom provides ...
to witness, then, your spirit glorify."
Thanks for sharing. Bless you, Bob
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hi Bob! Thank you so much for stopping by and reading...yes, Michael will surely be missed around here.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Susan,
Awwww - This is such a lovely tribute to your Irish brother.
Very nicely crafted. Norhing here for me to suggest improving upon.
The image you've selected complements your verse effectively.
Thanks for sharing.
Jan
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
Hi Susan,
Awwww - This is such a lovely tribute to your Irish brother.
Very nicely crafted. Norhing here for me to suggest improving upon.
The image you've selected complements your verse effectively.
Thanks for sharing.
Jan
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Hi there! thank you for this kind review...and yes, Michael will be missed around here, for sure.
Comment from DR DIP
A beautiful write Susan You certainly have a beautiful way with words. What a wonderful accompanying photo. I am sure Michael would be looking down from heaven with an approving smile
xxdip
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
A beautiful write Susan You certainly have a beautiful way with words. What a wonderful accompanying photo. I am sure Michael would be looking down from heaven with an approving smile
xxdip
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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Thanks Dip for the kind words...he will be missed.