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stars pierce the heavens

5/7/5 poem

61 total reviews 
Comment from rama devi
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Delicious imagery! What a beautiful presentation too. Tasteful and artistic. Outstanding phonetics in this polished 5-7-5. Extraordinary word economy too. I applaud all the S and soft C resonances and the subtle counterpoint of hard C and T. Loved reading this aloud. The consonance and alliteration of P is superb as well.

A six if I had one.

:-))))

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you rama devi for your encouraging review and virtual sixth star. I always appreciate your review.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by rama devi on 14-Feb-2019
    :-))))
Comment from Gail Denham
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Great choice of background. And what an excellent image of a night with heavenly light. We always anticipate summer nights out camping when we will be able to fully appreciate the majesty of the heavens.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you Gail for your encouraging review. .

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from PeterRHW
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You have written two lines to set the scene and then two words to make it an outstanding poem. Carefully chosen words, alliteration, picture and colour scheme all make this a winner. Best wishes, Peter

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you Peter for your encouraging review and good wishes.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from swelling
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Very nice - love the picture you chose to accompany your poem.
I thought the first and second lines complemented each other but wonder if jewelled and opulence are too similar. Nature's opulence or God's opulence (as you are using the word heavens). Just a thought - take no notice as it is a lovely poem.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you for your encouraging review.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

"stars piece the heavens", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Each word of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you duchess for your encouraging review and the extra special sixth star. I always appreciate hearing from you.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 14-Feb-2019

    Janet,

    You certainly deserved the encouraging review and sixth star.

    Take care and God bless you,
    the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from LynSys
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The words go perfectly with the picture, Janet. Great match-up!
The "Recognized" and "All Time Best" Awards are well deserved.
Good luck in the contest.
Lynda

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you Lynda for your encouraging review and good luck wishes.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by LynSys on 14-Feb-2019
    You're very welcome ;o)
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
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Well-written 5-7-5 poem. Your choice of carefully-chosen descriptive words is sublime. And the accompanying artwork is so beautiful. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you Stephanie for your encouraging review.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from gmartinez247
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Missing S on opulence for last syllable separation clarity ? Great captivating read concept poem entry good submission and Good Luck in the contest and may God Bless

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you for your encouraging review.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from susand3022
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Hi JMF, You must be in a really beautiful area that is away from a large town or city. My parents have a summer place in such an area, it's a place where you can see it all when the stars come out... so pretty.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you Susan for your encouraging review.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from angel123
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I enjoyed reading your short nature poem (5-7-5). It is well-written and well received. I love the stars and the heavens. Your artwork is beautiful and your message spiritual and powerful. Good use of alliteration of m letters and sounds. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
    Thank you angel for your encouraging review.

    Blessings
    Janet