This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Veronica Is Furious!"Third book in the time travel trilogy
39 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Fingers crossed, fingers crossed, fingers crossed. This was one very unnerving chapter! I could feel Veronica's angst and fury and frustration. Hopefully, it has not been for nothing!! xo
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Fingers crossed, fingers crossed, fingers crossed. This was one very unnerving chapter! I could feel Veronica's angst and fury and frustration. Hopefully, it has not been for nothing!! xo
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I'm so pleased this chapter came over the way I wanted it to, thank you, Rachelle! I'm editing at the moment, a job I hate. :( Let's make a date for our face to face chat. I'm here every afternoon. If I said, 3pm my time, or later, let me know if that will be alright for you. xxx
Comment from dragonpoet
This chapter shows a lot about Veronica. She is compassionate and can think of ways out of a situation even with fear and anger pushing through. It also shows luck is a big help sometimes. We all hope she is in time to save them.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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This chapter shows a lot about Veronica. She is compassionate and can think of ways out of a situation even with fear and anger pushing through. It also shows luck is a big help sometimes. We all hope she is in time to save them.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 15-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Joan, for another of your lovely reviews. I really appreciate your kindness. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are most kindly welcome, Sandra.
Joan
Comment from BlueTiger
Great work as always! In the eighth paragraph I might restructure this sentence:
An angry cuss escaped his lips.
"Why can't people put things back properly?" the man grumbled as he bent to pick them up.
Looking forward to reading more, have a great day.
BT
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Great work as always! In the eighth paragraph I might restructure this sentence:
An angry cuss escaped his lips.
"Why can't people put things back properly?" the man grumbled as he bent to pick them up.
Looking forward to reading more, have a great day.
BT
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Hi, BT, thank you so much for your lovely review, and for your suggestion. I will take another look at that. Thank you, that's what I like about FS, I get people like you being so kind and helpful. I really appreciate it. :)) Sandra x xx
Comment from sandragee
I like the way Veronica tackles this problem. With some cursing and determination, she gets both doors open. The question is what's going to greet her on the other side of the door to the hospital passage?
Another great heart-stopping chapter of suspense.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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I like the way Veronica tackles this problem. With some cursing and determination, she gets both doors open. The question is what's going to greet her on the other side of the door to the hospital passage?
Another great heart-stopping chapter of suspense.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Sandra, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Now to find out if everyone has survived the ordeal. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from alexisleech
Poor Veronica - just when she thinks she's winning the battle, another hurdle gets thrown in her face. Of course Mildred and all the staff and patients will be okay, won't they? Yikes, if they're not, your readers will be up in arms!
I can't wait to find out.
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Poor Veronica - just when she thinks she's winning the battle, another hurdle gets thrown in her face. Of course Mildred and all the staff and patients will be okay, won't they? Yikes, if they're not, your readers will be up in arms!
I can't wait to find out.
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much, Alexis, for the wonderful 6 stars, and the fabulous review. I'm delighted you are still enjoying Veronica and Mildred's journey into the past. We will see what's behind the door next time ... will it be good? or will it be a tragedy? Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from TheStoryMan
Please let everyone be okay! I'm glad Veronica found a way to open the doors. Now we have to hope that she got them open in time. It has to be terrifying to be stuck in that situation.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Please let everyone be okay! I'm glad Veronica found a way to open the doors. Now we have to hope that she got them open in time. It has to be terrifying to be stuck in that situation.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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I'm editing the next part now, so you'll soon find out! LOL. Thank you so much for your lovely review. I didn't realise that most people in fires die from the smoke. If I was trapped in a fire, I think I'd prefer the smoke to the flames. Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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The smoke is far more dangerous than people realise. Most people die of smoke inhalation than from the flames themselves.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Oh my goodness sandramitchell
Talk about tension you with out a doubt had me so tense of what you wrote about why Veronica was so enraged
Now here us reviewers are left hanging on thin thread to see what happens next.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Oh my goodness sandramitchell
Talk about tension you with out a doubt had me so tense of what you wrote about why Veronica was so enraged
Now here us reviewers are left hanging on thin thread to see what happens next.
Gert
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Gert, for reading and reviewing this part, I love your review, my friend, it put big smile on my face!! Big hugs, :)) Sandra xxx
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You are welcome Sandra
Gert, waiting to see what happens next.
Comment from giraffmang
Very nice tension built up in this instalment. the emotions come across very well indeed.
I cried out as I ran along the corridor, the scissors still clutched in my hand. - doesn't she know you should never run with scissors? Don't let the kids read this... serve her right if they were all dea...
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Very nice tension built up in this instalment. the emotions come across very well indeed.
I cried out as I ran along the corridor, the scissors still clutched in my hand. - doesn't she know you should never run with scissors? Don't let the kids read this... serve her right if they were all dea...
Comment Written 13-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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LOL!!! I don't think she could hurt herself with the scissors. But, I will put an X rated warning on the front of the book so as young children under the age of 20, and over the age of 30 can't read it! LOL!!! Thank you so much, my friend, for this lovely review! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from rwilliam
I really liked the part where she is pushing things over, and especially liked the chalk episodes... LOL Great writing!!
"Bloody hell! If you're looking down, I'm telling you now, don't you ever show your sorry faces to me!" --LOVED this! Made me laugh.
Fun chapter. I liked the humor in it. :)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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I really liked the part where she is pushing things over, and especially liked the chalk episodes... LOL Great writing!!
"Bloody hell! If you're looking down, I'm telling you now, don't you ever show your sorry faces to me!" --LOVED this! Made me laugh.
Fun chapter. I liked the humor in it. :)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2019
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Thank you so very much, Rebecca, that was a fabulous review, I loved it! Thanks for all those stars, my friend, you've started my day with a big smile! Big hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
Just like a woman to panic. Whoops, I didn't say that. Must of been Mr Edwards or one of the jittery tailors. I think they are invisible time travelers.
This is an excellent chapter of frustration and anger. I suspect The Powers were just smiling.
Too bad there wasn't a small oil can for the sewing machines so Veronica could place a few drops of oil to aid in moving the bolt. (like the Tin Man in the Wizard of Oz)
Nice tease at the end
Well done
Robert
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Hello Sandra,
Just like a woman to panic. Whoops, I didn't say that. Must of been Mr Edwards or one of the jittery tailors. I think they are invisible time travelers.
This is an excellent chapter of frustration and anger. I suspect The Powers were just smiling.
Too bad there wasn't a small oil can for the sewing machines so Veronica could place a few drops of oil to aid in moving the bolt. (like the Tin Man in the Wizard of Oz)
Nice tease at the end
Well done
Robert
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Robert, for another of your fun reviews. I think it was the men that panicked, running away from a little piece of chalk!!! LOL!!! We'll brush over the fact it was flying on its own. :))
Yes, that was a bit short-sighted of Veronica not to have looked for some oil, but I think she was in such a temper, reason flew out the window. And I'm sure the Powers were smiling. We'll soon find out.
Thank you also for the lovely shiny stars, my friend, I really appreciate both review and the stars.
Big hugs, Sandra xx
