Renaissance of Enchantment
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Chapter Three, Part 1"It was their world long before our existence...
20 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
It does not matter where that mansion is, it is absolutely gorgeous! The ones who live there in your story are definitely not main stream individuals. It keeps it all worth following. I can hardly to wait for when Rosemary finds out about her inheritance...whatever it turns out to be.
re: "Probably a whole bunch of nosey dickheads that could care less about Rosemary or The Refuge." Gary was kindof a bit like Peadar -- a space is needed between kind and of
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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It does not matter where that mansion is, it is absolutely gorgeous! The ones who live there in your story are definitely not main stream individuals. It keeps it all worth following. I can hardly to wait for when Rosemary finds out about her inheritance...whatever it turns out to be.
re: "Probably a whole bunch of nosey dickheads that could care less about Rosemary or The Refuge." Gary was kindof a bit like Peadar -- a space is needed between kind and of
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Oooops! Thanx for the catch there, my lady!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Well, wow! First you start with a girl being dragged off to God knows where, then suddenly she's all alone and two boys are taking her somewhere, then she's grown living in a dangerous neighborhood in love with a guy who antsy about sticking around. Then blast me to who knows where like, where a mysterious set up is taking place about an Order! Zoom! I love it! Bored will never be the case I'm sure as I read on. Got to this Chapter and hopefully will read more soon! (Demetrius sounds yummy) haha! Terrific story (stories) xoxo
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Well, wow! First you start with a girl being dragged off to God knows where, then suddenly she's all alone and two boys are taking her somewhere, then she's grown living in a dangerous neighborhood in love with a guy who antsy about sticking around. Then blast me to who knows where like, where a mysterious set up is taking place about an Order! Zoom! I love it! Bored will never be the case I'm sure as I read on. Got to this Chapter and hopefully will read more soon! (Demetrius sounds yummy) haha! Terrific story (stories) xoxo
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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You just never know what gonna happen with this one (lots of intricacies woven throughout... gotta pay attention - lol!) Thanx so much for the review, Beautiful Friend! THANK YOU for this awesome review and those shining stars -- see? Help for the smile I have to wear as I make YouTube videos teaching math for my students!! ;) :) Please know that your support is always so wonderful and I am forever grateful!! ;)
Please understand that this is a ridiculously abbreviated (and cut/paste) response for me, but I have been (still am!) in the midst of converting everything to online learning for the mandated school closings for the foreseeable future. Once I get ?ahead? in this ?change of venues? (i.e., instruction in cyberspace ? lol!), I promise to be back to ?me? in my responses? you know, the crazy blonde fantasy chick! ;) ;)
Be safe and, remember, if you see any offerings/reviews from me, they are my ?escape? from this insanity? you know, my pressure release valve!! ;) ;)
Take care of you and we?ll be sailing smoothly again in a few more days? hopefully!
[sorry - know you've seen this before, but I feel SOOO bad!!]
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Just keep writing! I'm in love with this story! hahaha!! xoxoxoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I hope the memorial will go just fine. The three-way marriage sounds a bit complicated. Evidently we must not judge his character, but it is bit odd to have that many wives.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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I hope the memorial will go just fine. The three-way marriage sounds a bit complicated. Evidently we must not judge his character, but it is bit odd to have that many wives.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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I cannot even imagine, yeah?! ;) :) :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
No need to answer all these reviews. I am just catching up.
The story is rolling along nicely, getting each character set in their role. Personalities are emerging.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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No need to answer all these reviews. I am just catching up.
The story is rolling along nicely, getting each character set in their role. Personalities are emerging.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2020
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You so rock, my lady!! :) Smilin' over here...
Comment from Sankey
A most interesting chapter for sure. Still looking forward to catching up0 hopefully to where I came in, today. Geoffrey is Bi-sexual for sure! One spag. Gary was kind(space)of
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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A most interesting chapter for sure. Still looking forward to catching up0 hopefully to where I came in, today. Geoffrey is Bi-sexual for sure! One spag. Gary was kind(space)of
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Thanx for the catch! ;) ;)
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I need to remind you of a Copyright term I invented Spagarama ©G.C.Moore 2015
The late Michael Cahill if you remember him, loved it!
Comment from JudyE
Some more information revealed here which is good.
I have a few suggestions:
There were, quite surprisingly, a lot more people than Geoffrey had expected to be there. - I might have said 'There were, quite surprisingly, a lot more people there than Geoffrey had expected.'
Gary was kindof a bit like Peadar - 'kindof' should be two words
The command in her hushed statement not easily missed - there is an extra space after 'her'
Cheers
Judy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Some more information revealed here which is good.
I have a few suggestions:
There were, quite surprisingly, a lot more people than Geoffrey had expected to be there. - I might have said 'There were, quite surprisingly, a lot more people there than Geoffrey had expected.'
Gary was kindof a bit like Peadar - 'kindof' should be two words
The command in her hushed statement not easily missed - there is an extra space after 'her'
Cheers
Judy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2019
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Thanx so much for all these -- into the file they go to look at when Mom leaves on Wednesday -- thank you so very much!! ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Hello Miss Yvette! I'm pretty sure I'm all caught up now... but I'm an avid re-reader so I'll read to the end anyway! LOL I did catch a typo!
In the paragraph that starts: "Probably a whole bunch of nosey dickheads..."
"... The Refuge." Gary was (kind of) more...
That's all I noticed in all your chapters so far! Well done! I'm enjoying this... especially Maggie's special power that she doesn't even seem to know she's got yet! I hope she doesn't tell the wrong person to get lost sometime!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hello Miss Yvette! I'm pretty sure I'm all caught up now... but I'm an avid re-reader so I'll read to the end anyway! LOL I did catch a typo!
In the paragraph that starts: "Probably a whole bunch of nosey dickheads..."
"... The Refuge." Gary was (kind of) more...
That's all I noticed in all your chapters so far! Well done! I'm enjoying this... especially Maggie's special power that she doesn't even seem to know she's got yet! I hope she doesn't tell the wrong person to get lost sometime!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Well, somebody just earned her 'star' in reading for the week -- and in more ways than one! ;) ;) Thanx for the catch, ma'am, I got that all fixed up! ;) And like I said before, so glad to have you on board! ;) ;) Take care this week! :) Yvette
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Hi Yvette in the paragraph where you talk about Geoffrey being an attorney for (IT) you don't need to hyphenate it like you have as I-T. So it isn't like that in the tech world - I know as I work in it. Just FYI. Just have IT and that will represent internet technology or technologies if that is what you meant. Hope I could finally help you! I love the seduction pieces here and the polyandry you have incorporated but with the twist from the man's perspective, so wild!!!! Yes! More! Please! I absolutely adore the playful nature and way that your characters interact! Okay. A couple more to go before I'm caught up. Madam recognized writer and beautiful teacher you have a fun and wild side - I like it! Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hi Yvette in the paragraph where you talk about Geoffrey being an attorney for (IT) you don't need to hyphenate it like you have as I-T. So it isn't like that in the tech world - I know as I work in it. Just FYI. Just have IT and that will represent internet technology or technologies if that is what you meant. Hope I could finally help you! I love the seduction pieces here and the polyandry you have incorporated but with the twist from the man's perspective, so wild!!!! Yes! More! Please! I absolutely adore the playful nature and way that your characters interact! Okay. A couple more to go before I'm caught up. Madam recognized writer and beautiful teacher you have a fun and wild side - I like it! Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Wow!! This is three in a row from you, Lady F!! ;) ;) You know, I actually originally had just IT but I got a couple of folks wondering what it was...was it a company they should know about... sigh. If I have the opportunity to actually publish at any time, I will definitely leave it as IT without the insane hyphen! ;) :) Thanx for the heads up though, glad you're out there keeping me honest! :) And ssshhhhhh....teachers aren't supposed to have a wild side - LOL! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I looks like the whole family has turned out for the funeral, even though they all ignored her while she was alive. I wonder if the your lady who has inherited everything is among them. I can't wait to read the reaction when the will is read. Another great piece, Yvette. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I looks like the whole family has turned out for the funeral, even though they all ignored her while she was alive. I wonder if the your lady who has inherited everything is among them. I can't wait to read the reaction when the will is read. Another great piece, Yvette. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Rosemary was a very beloved innkeeper and friend. :) ;) ;) Her niece is actually the young lady you met at the very beginning of the story which is why Geoffrey has Stephen looking for her. :) :) ;) Thanx for hanging in there, ma'am -- always so good to hear from you! :) ;) Yvette :)
P.S. I really wish I had time to catch up on yours but I fear there aren't enough hours in the days....I will, perhaps, be able to do a little come Spring Break! ;) ;) Take care! ;) ;)
Comment from lyenochka
I'm having a little trouble getting into this because there are suddenly so many new characters and the narrator seems to be a character, too because of the conversational speech (like the "Whatever.") but it's not in the first person. I feel like I'm trying to get a peek over a crowd.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I'm having a little trouble getting into this because there are suddenly so many new characters and the narrator seems to be a character, too because of the conversational speech (like the "Whatever.") but it's not in the first person. I feel like I'm trying to get a peek over a crowd.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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My apologies, Helen -- I guess when I write, I tend to have a much more relaxed style that is usually written from the 'narrating viewpoint' of the person that is at the center of the write. In this case, you got Geoffrey's take on things, in general, but not so narrowly so that details could be noted around him as well. Definitely different from yours, but not completely...I do hope you're enjoying - however, if you'd prefer not to continue, I would understand. :( ;) :) Thank you for your time on this one, Professor -- take care! ;) ;) Yvette :)
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I'll try to keep up, dear Yvette! But this old brain is not as agile as yours! ♥
