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Aah

It feels so good

15 total reviews 
Comment from artisart4u
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Congratulations on your win and I know that sun feels good to him.
You have the right amount of syllables on each line.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
    Thank you for reviewing my poem. That smiling dog won it for me. All credit goes to him.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Aah, has the right set up and reflects the soothing feeling that direct sunlight can have on the general disposition of all.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
    I hope your disposition is sunny today, Bill. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What a cutie! Congratulations on your first place win. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good job on the syllable count, the picture, alliteration of w, and a fun read. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you, Jan. That is a very kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Perfect words for that sweet expression on that puppy's face! Yes, it makes me "want to smile." That's a great ending line in the 5-7-5 and we all can wish for the smile in the sun these days!
Congratulations on the win!!!

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you, lyenochka. Sun and that puppy make me want to smile.
Comment from Ogden
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Congratulations on your well-deserved first place finish, Debbie!
Not only does the illustration capture the dog's facial expression, but you did a wonderful job explaining it.
Hugs,
Don

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thanks again, Don.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;) Is that your little guy or did you borrow him for the contest? LOL!! ;) ;) A fun entry that certainly deserved his win! ;) Great job, MQ! ;) Have a great day! ;) Yvette ;)

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you, Yvette. No, that little fellow is not one of ours. He does look like the cocker spaniels that we used to own. They all did that lifting the head to the sun thing. I do it, too. Then I smile. Wish we had some sun today to smile at. I'm rambling, but it is nice to have a FanStory friend who shares my weather.
    I enjoyed your rock and roll tribute, too. I could not get Peggy Sue out of my head yesterday. And, worse, somebody made a comment and I responded, "that'll be the day." See what you do to me.
reply by Y. M. Roger on 05-Feb-2019
    Hooray! I keep you distracted and smiling! :) ;) So good to know I do have a positive impact - LOL! :) ;) You take care down there today -- open the windows! It's fresh air!! :) ;) Yvette :) ;)
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Air full of allergens! They are shut tight.:)
Comment from sfharper
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What a terrific title for this poem and the image. It makes me cold thinking about snow up north but also warm and the wet nose of the puppy. Love the last line and the alliteration. Enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
    Thank you for mentioning my title. When I thought of it, I said "Ahah." Seriously. Then, I had to look up how to spell it. Aah or ahh? I kept thinking what a silly title, and I don't even know how to spell it. It was my favorite part of the poem though. I am so glad that you liked it, too.
    I appreciate your nice review and your attention to details. So many people don't even look at the title, and I always labor over them.
Comment from gramag4
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Very nicely captured. The thought flows so smoothly. I think we can all relate to this scenario and your picture choice captures it perfectly... and you did make me smile!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Glad that I could make you smile. Thank you for reading my poem.
reply by gramag4 on 05-Feb-2019
    You are quite welcome!
reply by gramag4 on 05-Feb-2019
    You are quite welcome!
Comment from angel123
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I like your message about the sunbeams soothing all creatures under the sun. It's a message we all can relate too. Your poem is well written and you followed the word count. Best wishes.


s all creatures under the sun.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thank you, Angel. All creature do feel better in the sun. I wish that it wasn't bad for us. Seems like all good things are.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A little sunshine can bring so much joy to all things in nature and your words are filled with sunny beams and that artwork is a perfect match, animals love a little bit of warm sunshine, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thank you, Dolly. I totally agree about the joy of sunshine.