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Chochee Medina Life and Times

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Comment from trimple
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Good evening to you, Gmartine

Your Acrostic poem is poignant and nicely written.

Never forget-God forgives all but humans are less able to forgive and forget.

Good luck in the contest

kind regards

trimple

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review, insight, and Good Luck wishes.
    God Bless
Comment from patcelaw
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May we never forget what the Lord has done for us and how He has worked in our lives to make us the people we are today. I dare say that without Him my life would be a total mess. Patricia

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Amen,
    That men of power tend to Repeat history over time is my conceptual concern.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
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Thank you for sharing this entry in the acrostic poetry contest. I have seen another poem with this theme and illustration already today; it seems to be on the collective consciousness. Your point is clear and your first letters do spell out a word (two actually). Good luck with your contest entry!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and insight,
    If you don't mind can you reveal the name of the similar poem I'd like to read it.
    Yes on the two words, I hope that is allowed in the contest.
reply by KyColonel Randal on 02-Feb-2019
    I believe the similar poem was called "ReManifesting Destiny."
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    It's also one of my works.
    Thanks for responding.
reply by KyColonel Randal on 02-Feb-2019
    I review with blinders on, so a lot of times I can't tell for sure.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
    Thank you I was curious as I am a George.