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Chochee Medina Life and Times

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Comment from pome lover
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I'm not sure I understand your meaning related to the present and our borders. Do you mean we should just let any and all come into our country illegally, with the drug smugglers, human traffickers, murderers etc? Or am I misunderstanding you? I apologize if I am.
Are you saying prayer without a plan? Leave the whole thing up to God? Or with His guidance we can solve the border crisis?
pome lover (trying to understand your post)

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review,
    I'm not condoning any illegal activity. My point is there is already the above mentioned of Every stripe, and not coming in mass quantities by illegal in back packs, In and above us in other ports and methods in higher quantities.
    Lands have been taken away from land owners on the border in the past for similar nefarious agendas.
    I have faith God will sort all long term problems out see Revelations no fear mongering or monuments required.
Comment from heavenempress
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Hi, have learnt something about your history. Your piece of work is educative. I pray that what you yearn for may be restored by the Almighty God. All the best.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review,
    I Have complete faith in God, praying everyday for concerns and peace.
    Sharing concerns to help ease minds and remember history in its completeness.
Comment from kiwijenny
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The God I Believe,
He does let me choose what to do,
He does not practice to Decieve,
and I'm Sorry but, to Believe it's up to you!
I like this stanza best...well penned
God bless

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and inspirational words of encouragement.
    God Bless
Comment from KyColonel Randal
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Thank you for sharing this poem. There is a lot going on here, from a historical account of Native Americans, to current political themes, to religious proselytizing. I like your picture and find propaganda such as Columbia to be intriguing. Good luck with your contest entry!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and kind words of encouragement. Lot of things going through my brain right now, I tend to compare with events in the past.
    God Bless
Comment from Earl Corp
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I agree with your observations how Native Americans were treated. I guess that is something the Europeans passed on, to shove their beliefs down someone else's throat. Kind of like we tried in Vietnam, Iraq, and Afghanistan. I don't think a wall is the answer. On the other hand, I do think if you come here it is a duty to assimilate and become a citizen. Immigration isnt a problem just do it right. Why go through the hassle of getting to America and not embracing the culture?

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and insight looks like as then we will be getting refugees from Venezula expansionism has a cost nobody considers as for we of Mexican and American Indian descent pre - US history with assimilation would not be speaking English as there is no American language
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Dear Anonymous Poet,

What an interesting poem. Yes, the lies are running rampant, and I never equated it to the treatment our forefathers received. I do believe that rational folks would never have allowed the things that happened to Native Americans to go on - if they weren't fed the information about 'savages.'

Good luck to you in the contest - your poem certainly tells a compelling story,

~Mustang Patty~

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the review and insight and Kind comments
    Actually History shows Native Americans were pioneers in the expansion of the US