Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams

Excellent

Cute, but oh my, so impatient. I love guinea pigs...I think there is nothing porcine about them though...LoL!

I like the way you personify your poem and I like the picture used.

Nice job!

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks so much. Elaine

reply by Sandra Elizabeth Williams on 20-Aug-2019

You are welcome, Elaine.

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

This was a good read, Mermaids. I like that you wrote it from the animal's viewpoint. You could probably even expand this to a children's story. Nice job.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Randa Dayle

Excellent

Very cute poem, and I glad you showed of picture of your inspriation. Personally, I like Capitalization, and Puncuation, but that's just me. Your poem is very nice!

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Hello there, my friend. This is such an adorable little poem. I love your picture,
your guinea pig is so darn cute. lol ~Kerry

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Malerie

Excellent

Well done from your Yeti's view, I'm sure you did it justice. Cute pic to tell the story. I like the line royalty does does not linger for substance. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there,

Such a wonderful picture of your guinea pig. How many do you have? Is Yeti the only queen you have?

I enjoyed the mixture of true royalty with the synonym used for a breeder. It works well with the photo.

~Mustang Patty~

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

We have six female guinea pigs and they are pure joy to have. They keep us entertained. Yeti is the oldest and the leader of the herd. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Mermaids,

Ha ha ha.

This is a lovely tribute to your sweet guinea pig, my friend! I love that it's in her voice. It is very well done - nothing here for me to suggest improving upon. (I recently wrote one from a dog's viewpoint and it was well accepted.)

And she is just gorgeous! Great picture!

Thanks so much for sharing your great work - keep writing! :-)

Jan

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019

Thank you for your positive review and lovely comment about our Yeti. Animals are so much fun to write about. Thanks for your great review. Elaine

reply by HealingMuse on 20-Feb-2019

You are most welcome. My pleasure. Jan :-)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello mermaids what a great rhyming poem about your guinea pigs with your
entry for the "Animals" event in "Animal Crackers" club.
Smiles Gert

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

reply by Gert sherwood on 09-Feb-2019

You are so welcome mermaids
Gert

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Yeti, what a fun and original name for your guinea pig. Great job with this poem too. I enjoyed it very much and thank you for the fond memories of my childhood pet, Fred.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019

Fred must have been so cute. I am obsessed with our guinea pigs, they are great stress busters. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I used to raise them and they were a sheer delight to hear. Loved the churbling and the ambulance sounds as each meant something different. Very nicely done

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019

I am fascinated by these delightful animals. it must have been such fun to raise them. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine