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A Stronger Bond

Building Additional Hearts

6 total reviews 
Comment from Pantygynt
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I was going to say that this was a kind of afterbirth poem, until I realised that those words expressed something totally different from what I meant to say which was:

This a poem about that moment after birth when the love between two people has brought a new life into the world. There! Is that any better?

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

Comment from Bill Pinder
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This is a well written poem. It is an interesting expression of experiencing the birth of a child. I appreciate the genuine feeling of love mixed with heartache.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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This is so beautiful! You certainly picked the perfect piece of artwork to illustrate your poem :) Two joined, now three :) This is a gorgeous love poem for the woman and child of your heart.
I wish you the very best in the contest!!!
Gale

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

Comment from called2rite
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The visualness of this poem resonates with reality. I did have to read it twice to sort things our. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019

Comment from Christine C Autry
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I really enjoyed this poem. Very well written. It was beautiful. Very romantic I like to hear pretty poetry. Thank you for sharing your talent. You told a story in a few short lines. I appreciate this work.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You have some honest and raw words here to describe your close relationship and your devotion to the one you love, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dollyx

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019