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Standing Ovation

a 5-7-5. Humor

19 total reviews 
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent, what a very clever poem, words combined with this artwork are marvelous, very well written and presented, my congratulations to the writer and sculptor****kahpot

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
    Hey, kahpot. Thanks for the great review... I wish I could take credit for the photo, but alas, it was not mine. Google supplied it for our amusement. Glad you liked it.

    Melissa
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Melissa

What a great photo! I wonder how long it was able to stay like that. The rhythm of this piece almost feels like the beginning of a limerick.

Thank you for sharing,

~patty~

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
    Hi Patty. I think the beginning sounds like that too. In fact, I have just posted a limerick today... i guess that rhythm is in my brain... haha.. Thank you.

    Melissa
Comment from Joan E.
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Oh, my--now that is cold--especially when one lives in Southern California!! That's also quite a way to leave "a lasting impression"! Thanks for sharing the amazing image and your memorable 5-7-5. Big cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2019
    Hi, Joan. Thanks for the great review. It does look quite cold and I wonder how long it lasted too. I am glad they snapped a pic of it.

    All the best,

    Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
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Wow! Where do you get all these pictures, Melissa. This is is beautiful. Your 5-7-5 poem is on the line and it did the job cause I laughed right on time. :) Thank you for showing that a picture is worth a thousand words.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
    Thank you. I find these pics on Google. I am delighted you enjoyed this funny one.

    Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, this is a fun presentation Melissa and you made me smile here with this one, but without the picture the meaning of your words is unfortunately lost, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
    Yep, a fine case of the photo coming first. Lol. Thanks a bunch, Dolly.

    Melissa
Comment from Teresa Alford
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Good Morning, Melissa. This jeep definitely does leave a lasting impression impression. Your poem is a good match for this unique picture. SMILES! Ta. ";-)

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
    Thanks so much, Teresa.

    Melissa
Comment from Ms. Snyder
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I wish I had a 6 for this Melissa, it is fantastic, the picture is amazing. After all the years of living in Illinois, Ohio and other parts where the weather freezes, this is te first time that I've seen this. And what an endorsement for Jeep - to have the get-up and go - to leave the spot with that intact. It is amazing. Your poem just encapsulates it perfectly. Cheers, Fonda

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
    Thanks so much, Fonda. I am glad you like it...

    All the best,

    Melissa
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Melissa,

Incredible illustration for your standout 5-7-5 verse

Might you change 'sure' to 'just'? The just goes with Jeep, rather than sure with your last impression LOL

THANKS for sharing.

Mark

P.S. If we make your Jeep a female, then the lasting impression might change your text to: and she wanted ... or that sure wanted to leave her lasting impression. Pat Brady drove ol' Nellybelle in Roy Rogers movies and TV shows.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
    Hey Mark!! How are you? I like your comments and suggestions and plan to go back and take a look at how they fit.. Thank you.

    Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. What a picture! Is that just the ice that was left after the car moved away? That must be really cold temperature to keep the ice even after the engine warmed the car! Thanks for the fun!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
    Hi Helen. I thought it was a hoot. The grill on a Jeep is so distinctive that it was not hard to identify it. It must be very cold there to stay after the vehicle moved. Thanks for the review.

    Melissa
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
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oh wow, that's quite a picture you found! Look at all that ice left behind! I like your sense of humor and how you start it off like a little story, there once was a jeep! My car was covered with ice today but not as bad as leaving behind it's impression!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
    Haha... thanks, Kathleen, for the fun review. It must have been very cold there to leave that ice behind. I thought the pic was a hoot!!

    Melissa