Pix This 2019
Viewing comments for Prologue "Definitely a Plop!"art inspired poetry
16 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Cute "argument" in modified triolet form. I like the onomatopoeia with "plop" and "splash." I like running into the word "balderdash" once in a while, because it seems to be a vanishing word. It brings back memories of guest stars on a children's TV show from the early 1970s which was actually called "Balderdash" (not the game show).
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Cute "argument" in modified triolet form. I like the onomatopoeia with "plop" and "splash." I like running into the word "balderdash" once in a while, because it seems to be a vanishing word. It brings back memories of guest stars on a children's TV show from the early 1970s which was actually called "Balderdash" (not the game show).
Comment Written 21-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2019
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Hello :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Debra. It's good to see you're back. Glad to see you posting again. This was a fun write for the club. Plop or splash it sure looks pretty in the pix. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Hi Debra. It's good to see you're back. Glad to see you posting again. This was a fun write for the club. Plop or splash it sure looks pretty in the pix. Marilyn
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Hi Marilyn :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback.
Kind regards, Debra
Comment from JennaG
I love this triolet, especially your choice of repeating lines! What a clever use of the form! And, I also love the modifications you made. Those last two lines are so fun and creative! This was a fresh and original interpretation of the artwork. It was a pleasure to read and brought a smile to my face. Well done! :)
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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I love this triolet, especially your choice of repeating lines! What a clever use of the form! And, I also love the modifications you made. Those last two lines are so fun and creative! This was a fresh and original interpretation of the artwork. It was a pleasure to read and brought a smile to my face. Well done! :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Hi Jenna :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! Glad you enjoyed the poem :)
Kind regards, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, it must be fun to be you. Such a fresh and witty poem. I am just getting into poetry as I am mostly a short works writer. Poetry forms and construction is a new world for me, but I am enjoying it. I throughly enjoyed you triolet poem very much!
All my best,
Sal :+)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Oh, it must be fun to be you. Such a fresh and witty poem. I am just getting into poetry as I am mostly a short works writer. Poetry forms and construction is a new world for me, but I am enjoying it. I throughly enjoyed you triolet poem very much!
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi Sally :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback!
I'm happy you enjoyed the triolet...being me has it's moments, many of them fun :D
Kind regards, Debra
Comment from Heather Knight
This is hilarious. You brought a smile to my face. It's so simple and at the same time so clever. The sound repetition is gorgeous and somewhat onomatopoeic.
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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This is hilarious. You brought a smile to my face. It's so simple and at the same time so clever. The sound repetition is gorgeous and somewhat onomatopoeic.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi Maria,
Thank you for your lovely feedback :)
I'm glad you enjoyed the read!
Kind regards, Debra
Comment from Dean Kuch
You say tomay-toe, and I say tom-at-toe,
You say po-ta-toe, and I say pat-tat-toe...
and so on, ad infinitum...
Good way to implement the topic into your Pix This piece, Debra.
~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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You say tomay-toe, and I say tom-at-toe,
You say po-ta-toe, and I say pat-tat-toe...
and so on, ad infinitum...
Good way to implement the topic into your Pix This piece, Debra.
~Dean
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Dean :)
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Yep, yep...
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well if this is isn't splish, splash, splosh then I don't know what is! They are, without a doubt, talking a load of big creamy dollop of plop, so you tell em Debra! This made me laugh so hard and was not what I was expecting yet is expected from your inkpot and quill... so you are definitely one of those expect the unexpected writers while they are more like this line... an oxymoron :) Brilliantly written and a hoot to boot, just what one needs on a Monday blues morning and a brilliant pick me up today!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Well if this is isn't splish, splash, splosh then I don't know what is! They are, without a doubt, talking a load of big creamy dollop of plop, so you tell em Debra! This made me laugh so hard and was not what I was expecting yet is expected from your inkpot and quill... so you are definitely one of those expect the unexpected writers while they are more like this line... an oxymoron :) Brilliantly written and a hoot to boot, just what one needs on a Monday blues morning and a brilliant pick me up today!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hello :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous star rating! I really appreciate it and am so happy that my little poem gave you a smile this morning!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a fun (modified) triolet, Debra. It is one of my favorite styles. You did a good job with it. Your repeating lines and rhymes fit well. It sounded great read aloud. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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This is a fun (modified) triolet, Debra. It is one of my favorite styles. You did a good job with it. Your repeating lines and rhymes fit well. It sounded great read aloud. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi Jan,
Thank you for your lovely feedback :)
Kind regards, Debra
Comment from Linda Engel
Debra, this is so cute. Well written and rhymed. Love how you chose to be creative with your fonts and highlight with bold. Great thought process with a small heated debate on splash or plop. It was fun and enjoyable. Good one for the Pix This challenge. I didn't get in on this one but I'm ready for the next one.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Debra, this is so cute. Well written and rhymed. Love how you chose to be creative with your fonts and highlight with bold. Great thought process with a small heated debate on splash or plop. It was fun and enjoyable. Good one for the Pix This challenge. I didn't get in on this one but I'm ready for the next one.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi Linda :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback, I appreciate it!
Looking forward to reading your submission for the next challenge...
Kind regards, Debra
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Debra! You're back! So lovely to see you. And with your wonderful sense of humour, lol, this is a great start. Please say you're back to stay, I've missed you. I haven't written any poetry for quite a while, but hope to start again sometime this year!! lol. Welcome back and big hugs. Sandra. xxxx
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Debra! You're back! So lovely to see you. And with your wonderful sense of humour, lol, this is a great start. Please say you're back to stay, I've missed you. I haven't written any poetry for quite a while, but hope to start again sometime this year!! lol. Welcome back and big hugs. Sandra. xxxx
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Hi Sandra!
Yes, I'm back...for now at least!
My friend bought me a notebook and told me I needed to start writing again. It's been snarling at me from the kitchen side for a couple of weeks and yesterday I just decided to be brave and go for it!
Thank you for the warm welcome back and for your lovely feedback. I've missed you!
Love Debra :) x
