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Nitwits!

Dribble Flash Fiction

13 total reviews 
Comment from Ulla
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Oh Dear, Zanya. This was just too much for the poor man and all his conventions. Shock horror to marry a commoner? No that can't be tolerated. I love it. 'Love is for nitwits'! Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Great review - apologies for late response on this one !zanya
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh no! The poor Lord Allesbury has taken the news very badly. I think he could have been just a tad more open-minded? Lol. Thanks for the humorous melodrama!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Joan E.
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Oh, a deathbed proclamation! I admired the dialog and did not expect the ending--literally! Good for you to find the matching mug!! Best wishes in the contest and continue to have a productive 2019- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Great review zanya
Comment from TheStoryMan
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This is very well written. There were no spelling or grammar errors and no typos. Poor Lord Allesbury...he just didn't understand love. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Great review zanya
Comment from giraffmang
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hi there,

Well that's the word count right on the nose so no worries in that department.

I liked this piece as you tell a lot about the characters from their reactions and names alone. Very nice and best of luck to you.

GMG

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Great review zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
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This dribble, Nitwits, meets the limited word requirement and finds Lord Allesbury getting the heart attack he'd been hoping for Melissa threw her needlepoint to the floor.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Great review zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written dribble flash fiction about love and nitwits. The aristorcrats do not belief in love and for them it is nothing to have more than one lover or nitwit.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Loved this review zanya
Comment from Earl Corp
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Very harsh last words from Lord Ailesbury. I'm sure having to adhere to the dribble flash fiction restrictions was hard and a lot got left on the cutting room floor. You had a beginning middle and end that made sense. You can't ask for more than that.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2019
    Superb review beautifully delivered !!zanya
Comment from Heather Knight
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This is a funny little story. I like the name you have chosen for your commoner. What could be more common tan John Smith?
Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

Comment from AdaJulie
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Love is for nitwits! I love it, nitwit and all. Being in love is the best, being loved back is better! Long love the loving nitwits! Great job on the nitwit love story

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019