The Find
A purse holds so many treasures(?).3 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, Brigitte. I enjoyed your poem. You did a good job with the contest prompt. The last 2 lines are priceless. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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Haha, Brigitte. I enjoyed your poem. You did a good job with the contest prompt. The last 2 lines are priceless. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this one. It was "fun" mood day! Thank you for the congrats, I was pleasantly surprised.
Have a great evening.
Brigitte
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent humorous poem about a purse full of stuff. The purse is aptly depicted by Renate-Bertodi's colorful notions. I enjoyed the words and the art. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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This is an excellent humorous poem about a purse full of stuff. The purse is aptly depicted by Renate-Bertodi's colorful notions. I enjoyed the words and the art. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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This was fun to write. After reading it again, I decided it may need some editing, rhyme more. Thank you for reading and commenting.
I have never seen your name before in a review so I am appreciative of your time.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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You are welcome. I have been taking a break for the past two months. No writing, reviewing, editing just pleasure reading.
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I love to curl up with a good book. Thank for reading this poem.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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To me it's need. My means of surviving.
Comment from estory
The carousel meter of this framed the theme well. And the images...you never know what you have accumulated, including old tic tacs (they still make those?) and dollar bills. But you have a nice humorous touch here, a poem that doesnt' take itself too seriously. estory
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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The carousel meter of this framed the theme well. And the images...you never know what you have accumulated, including old tic tacs (they still make those?) and dollar bills. But you have a nice humorous touch here, a poem that doesnt' take itself too seriously. estory
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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This was fun to write. After reading it again, I decided it may need some editing, rhyme more. Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, they still make tic tacs, mine was probably years old, lol.
I am appreciative of your time.
Blessings,
Brigitte
