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Viewing comments for Chapter 75 "European Robin"
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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What a pretty little bird this European Robin is and you describe it well in your Coles Rhythm poem, what it likes, and also what it is I love the artwork, very nice presentation.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Pearl, thank so much for your positive review. It is my favorite bird.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Cole's rhyme poem about the European Robin that is quite different from the American robin but they have the same features to make them distant family of each other.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Sandra, thank so much for your positive review. It is my favorite bird.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What fun and delightfully mesmerizing piece, Trisha -- who wouldn't love to see these little guys 'in person' now that you've described their little antics in such flowing rhyme....your three syllable, though? Just perfect based on the rest of the 'misbehavior' you've portrayed for us! :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Yvette, thank so much for your positive review. It is my favorite bird.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I really miss the robins, they are such colourful and delightful birds and they are in England all year round, your poem has described the differences and I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Dolly, thank so much for your positive review. It is my favorite bird.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Miss Sherry
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Bird lady here...love this. They are such sweet little creatures and charmed my socks off...now cold feet demand I pause and resock them. What a nice offering you have proffered here. A poem about a species of robin I didn't know about is such a joy.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Sherry, thank so much for your positive review. It is my favorite bird.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Earl Corp
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You did a very nice job. The poem rhymes, makes sense, and invokes good feelings within the reader. The picture you chose to accompany the poem is awesome!!!!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Early, thank so much for your positive review. It is my favorite bird.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Bucketlist,
I enjoyed your potlatch challenge poem. Your picture is super. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes, too. You did a good job adhering to the style.

Suggestions if I may:

Seeks garden soil freshly d (turned) word left off

2nd verse-->it's should be its

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
    Jan, thank so much for your positive review. It is my favorite bird.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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These European robins are very cute, tall, thin spindly legs, hops through the snowdrop beds, good twitter and happy with little dinner earned; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
    Hi Al, thanks for reviewing kindly. I hope you are having a good new year
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Give that cute bird his dinner. He earned it for sure. And he is too cute to be a robin.
Your descriptions are delightful. European robins are sparkly, spindly, and twittery. How fun. I even enjoyed your explanation of the food drops. That knowledge could be helpful. I have been the victim of such food drops before.
Thanks for the lovely post. Hope you are having a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
    Thank you so much for your compliments! Robins are shy, but my grandpa used to have one which would sit and wait while he gardened. He would whistle and talk to it.. it eventually was not shy of him. Those are nice memories for me.
    Hugs, Trisha. Happy weekend to you as well
reply by Debbie Pope on 16-Jan-2019
    That's a great memory. Your grandpa must have been a gentle man.
Comment from Teresa Alford
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You have demonstrated good skill in writing this poem. Writing poetry is not a strength, but I do dabble at it from time to time . Keep writing. TA ";~)

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2019

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
    Thank you so much, Teresa. Keep dabbling. Poetry is like a clinging vine- it will grow on you LOL!
    Hugs, Trisha