A Bit Ruff?
A 5-7-5 poem9 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
The picture and the poem are hilarious. Love the double meaning of behind 'fans' and 'lying'. Of course, lying is certainly appropriate for the president. Sigh.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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The picture and the poem are hilarious. Love the double meaning of behind 'fans' and 'lying'. Of course, lying is certainly appropriate for the president. Sigh.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2019
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Many thanks, I am glad you found the humor
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. I certainly have synmpathy with this little dog, in real extreme heat no fan can bring relieve from the heat while have to suffer against the heat.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. I certainly have synmpathy with this little dog, in real extreme heat no fan can bring relieve from the heat while have to suffer against the heat.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Miss Sherry
Kudos!! This is a sleeper...you don't realize how really good it is until the second read. Clever play on words is always appealing - dog is aways a winner. I will vote for the pup over the scoundrel any day.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Kudos!! This is a sleeper...you don't realize how really good it is until the second read. Clever play on words is always appealing - dog is aways a winner. I will vote for the pup over the scoundrel any day.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile and your few words produced a belly laugh from me! Good luck with the contest, I love the presentation here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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He he he, this made me smile and your few words produced a belly laugh from me! Good luck with the contest, I love the presentation here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Sam Saylor
this is bonkers. The picture makes it extremely hard to read this as anything other than comically which it indeed feels to be. Funny though also because without the picture it could be read in quite a serious fashion.
Sam
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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this is bonkers. The picture makes it extremely hard to read this as anything other than comically which it indeed feels to be. Funny though also because without the picture it could be read in quite a serious fashion.
Sam
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It may appear somewhat rough to think, but truth is truth, a doggy while taking rest lying under fans, it is natural that the dogs may acquire bigger fans than the president; well said, well done. Publish works that's readable every day and tomorrows -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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It may appear somewhat rough to think, but truth is truth, a doggy while taking rest lying under fans, it is natural that the dogs may acquire bigger fans than the president; well said, well done. Publish works that's readable every day and tomorrows -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from BigPoppaJrock
Very current and very true poem.. enjoyable picture to accompany you poem. Catchy title, I could see where it may be a bit ruff for some to take considering one political views. I enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Very current and very true poem.. enjoyable picture to accompany you poem. Catchy title, I could see where it may be a bit ruff for some to take considering one political views. I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Wonderful picture and even better poem - the best in impressionable presentation contest - I never heard of this - but still this seems like a winner and very cute and funny. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Wonderful picture and even better poem - the best in impressionable presentation contest - I never heard of this - but still this seems like a winner and very cute and funny. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from kiwisteveh
Slightly odd contest to have on a writing site, where the presentation has more importance than the words! However, I will let the voters worry about that and just comment on your words as they relate to the picture you have found. You manage a great pun as well as making a strong political comment, so well done.
PS Is the word in the title perhaps supposed to be 'Ruff' another pun?
Steve
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Slightly odd contest to have on a writing site, where the presentation has more importance than the words! However, I will let the voters worry about that and just comment on your words as they relate to the picture you have found. You manage a great pun as well as making a strong political comment, so well done.
PS Is the word in the title perhaps supposed to be 'Ruff' another pun?
Steve
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Many thanks, I have changed it
