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To Describe Beauty

as simple as black and white

15 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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Such a cool picture to illustrate the beauty of black and white. But I'm drawn to the blue eyes and the yellow ones. Yes, sometimes, real beauty doesn't need a color scheme and things viewed simply is best!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2019


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Comment from BeasPeas
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So true. Your 5-7-5 poem is appropriate and beautifully illustrated with the two tigers. I wish you the best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019


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Comment from Louise Michelle
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I'm a huge cat fan, both domestic and wild and enjoyed your short, short. Stunning picture and your words compliment it so nicely. Regards, Lou

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019


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Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this charming 5-7-5
about the beauty of unity. People at odds for whatever reason create chaos. The artwork is STUNNING!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2019


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Comment from kiwijenny
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Gorgeous photography....gorgeous thought to describe beauty...as simply beauty neither black or white, ,it just is
Well penned poem...
God bless...there should be no color scheme

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Now,this is a cool offering for the oft times 'over-played' 5-7-5 contest -- your words combined with that pic are an extremely powerful message! ;) :) Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


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Comment from 24chas
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I liked this read, Donette1914. I think you made a good point and I also think this piece was deeper than what it appeared upon first read. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


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Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Donette,

Awww, this is a sweet poem which encourages us to celebrate, rather than denigrate, diversity in all forms. Bravo! This is a great contest entry that should fare well. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019


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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the beauty of nature where there are many things that are simply perfectly created by the creator simply using black and white.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2019


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Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Gorgeous image, Donette.
-The syllable count is good.
-The color theme is effective.
-I like the idea in the
concluding line "with
no color scheme."
-A good entry for the contest.
-Good luck.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019


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reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Apr-2019
    You are welcome.