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Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "Scene at the Post Office"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from judiverse
Great punch line in this. If Ned has had any education, he certainly is keeping it a secret. Fun with Ned's interpretation of "post" and the association with chiropractic clinic next to the post office. Pons is pretty much going along with Ned in this one, not trying to set him straight. Maybe he's given up. Clever skit. judi
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Great punch line in this. If Ned has had any education, he certainly is keeping it a secret. Fun with Ned's interpretation of "post" and the association with chiropractic clinic next to the post office. Pons is pretty much going along with Ned in this one, not trying to set him straight. Maybe he's given up. Clever skit. judi
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Judi.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Earl Corp
The after office is a pretty creative expression. How you keep coming up with more of these Ned and Pons skits is amazing. They are hilarious. Very nice job.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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The after office is a pretty creative expression. How you keep coming up with more of these Ned and Pons skits is amazing. They are hilarious. Very nice job.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Earl.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What a Guy. Your secrets are safe with him. This is a very Humorous story featuring your two characters Ned and Pons. They are a couple of very funny fellows, Well done Bill. Nancy
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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What a Guy. Your secrets are safe with him. This is a very Humorous story featuring your two characters Ned and Pons. They are a couple of very funny fellows, Well done Bill. Nancy
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Nancy.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You have to do something with these scripts, Bill, you mustn't let them just dust away. This is another so funny one, I can never read Pons and Ned without laughing. They are brilliant! I love the 'after office' another classic, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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You have to do something with these scripts, Bill, you mustn't let them just dust away. This is another so funny one, I can never read Pons and Ned without laughing. They are brilliant! I love the 'after office' another classic, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Sandra. I hope to coordinate, edit, and got them out there this year.
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You must let us know how you do. I think you have something great here. :) xx
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHA! Okay, I guess even Pons has finally figured out there's not a lot of point in trying to get through to Ned. Funny script, but then those two are always a hoot. Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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HAHAHAHA! Okay, I guess even Pons has finally figured out there's not a lot of point in trying to get through to Ned. Funny script, but then those two are always a hoot. Well done!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Dawn. They crack me up.
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HAHAHAHA! Me too.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! That's our fun duo! ;) Is it just my imagination or was Ned a bit more "country-fied" in this one. .? Oh, don't worry, I can say that since I live out here in rural Alabama! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing, Sir Bill --- always enjoy these two. ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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LOL! That's our fun duo! ;) Is it just my imagination or was Ned a bit more "country-fied" in this one. .? Oh, don't worry, I can say that since I live out here in rural Alabama! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing, Sir Bill --- always enjoy these two. ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Yvette. His vernacular has a wide range. I've lived in Michigan, North Carolina, Oklahoma, and Iowa, here in the states and Ned is sometimes a little of each.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute script about Ned and Pons and the Post Office. You used really cute dialogue but some was a little hard for me to understand. You are good at writing these scripts. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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This is a very cute script about Ned and Pons and the Post Office. You used really cute dialogue but some was a little hard for me to understand. You are good at writing these scripts. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Teri. When I revise all of these scenes I will have to smooth out Ned's lingo.
Comment from WryWriter
This is priceless! May I say the medulla oblongata nerve fibers did a good job connecting to the mesencephalon on dear Pons, but Ned? He isn't the New English Dictionary but dang close! This was "post" thought, of course. These characters are like Abbott and Costello. Super funny! Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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This is priceless! May I say the medulla oblongata nerve fibers did a good job connecting to the mesencephalon on dear Pons, but Ned? He isn't the New English Dictionary but dang close! This was "post" thought, of course. These characters are like Abbott and Costello. Super funny! Enjoyed.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Thank you, WW. Ned needs a job, so that will be next.
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Heaven help us! LOL!
Comment from nomi338
Poor Ned, he doesn't have enough brain power to change his mind. Pons is a hero to still be unaffected by Ned's ignorance. Pons patience with Ned shows that he has the qualifications to work with the severely handicapped.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Poor Ned, he doesn't have enough brain power to change his mind. Pons is a hero to still be unaffected by Ned's ignorance. Pons patience with Ned shows that he has the qualifications to work with the severely handicapped.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Ned is handi-capable, nomi.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahahaha.
The After Office, huh?
I can see why Ned would think that, Bill.
After all, preschool means a school for kids that prepares them and gets 'em ready before they go to elementary school.
You must live near a bunch'a rednecks as I do. How else could you come up with these things, heh-heh?
Hilarious...
~Dean
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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Hahahaha.
The After Office, huh?
I can see why Ned would think that, Bill.
After all, preschool means a school for kids that prepares them and gets 'em ready before they go to elementary school.
You must live near a bunch'a rednecks as I do. How else could you come up with these things, heh-heh?
Hilarious...
~Dean
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2019
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I served in North Carolina and Oklahoma, so I have a lot draw on.
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Ah, that 'splains a lot...
