The Assertive Builder
Magnificently going from shyness to inspirer6 total reviews
Comment from Artasylum
Dear Secret Poet... this is lovely and uplifting this is especially poignant for me... I pray one day:
One day at a climatic time we will see.
Does kindness help many people to agree.
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Dear Secret Poet... this is lovely and uplifting this is especially poignant for me... I pray one day:
One day at a climatic time we will see.
Does kindness help many people to agree.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
Comment from Ricky1024
This sonnet poem writing entry was Russian theme and imagery it read well and flowed well with no grammar issues adjectives an object to come tents were both excellent and exceptional while descriptive measures aligned perfectly thanks for this doctor Ricky 10:24
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This sonnet poem writing entry was Russian theme and imagery it read well and flowed well with no grammar issues adjectives an object to come tents were both excellent and exceptional while descriptive measures aligned perfectly thanks for this doctor Ricky 10:24
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
Comment from Teresa Alford
I am not familiar with this type of poem but you seem to have done a very good job. I'm not quite sure that the picture fits the poem very well . But that's just my opinion . Keep up the good work. Write on!
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I am not familiar with this type of poem but you seem to have done a very good job. I'm not quite sure that the picture fits the poem very well . But that's just my opinion . Keep up the good work. Write on!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
Comment from Earl Corp
I enjoyed this poem immensely. I like the Terza Rima Sonnet style. It has everything I look for in a poem. It rhymes, it makes sense, it entertains and it invokes emotions within the reader. Good luck in the contest.
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I enjoyed this poem immensely. I like the Terza Rima Sonnet style. It has everything I look for in a poem. It rhymes, it makes sense, it entertains and it invokes emotions within the reader. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An ideal form to bring your sentiments here to the fore, you flowered and now you are helping others to do the same, wise and endearing words, I'm not familiar with this form, but I think you followed the rules! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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An ideal form to bring your sentiments here to the fore, you flowered and now you are helping others to do the same, wise and endearing words, I'm not familiar with this form, but I think you followed the rules! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
Comment from AdaJulie
This is so perfectly put together. I am very impressed and so grateful i got to read this. You are so talented. Great job and good luck to you . :):):)
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This is so perfectly put together. I am very impressed and so grateful i got to read this. You are so talented. Great job and good luck to you . :):):)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
