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Comment from Ms. Snyder
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You crack me up! I came to visit your profile. Please don't ask me how. The title drew me in right away. I can be drawn into simplicity in all forms. I wish I had the six stars that this honorable poem deserves. But alas, it is Thursday and we both know what that means in Fan Story. I want you to know that I have had my share of instigative interaction with the lovely advanced editor. I think this particular poem and the wit that you have provided here: falls right into my lap, up my alley, and down my stream. Thank you for giving me a great belly laugh this afternoon. I appreciate when people offer these great visuals with their work! Cheers, Fonda

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
    Thanks, Fonda, for checking out my profile. Hope we have a good year. Bill
Comment from nomi338
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No polagee needed. We all no how to reed an rite roun hear. we is intelignt enuf to no rite frum rong. we stayed in skul long nuff to gradjage wit honors. I tel u we is smart, smart an witty.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
    Nuff sped I reckon.
reply by nomi338 on 03-Jan-2019
    durn tootin'
Comment from Joy Graham
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Hi Bill,

This is a stand-out little poem :) You made me smile and resist the urge to correct your spelling lol! The message comes across as light-hearted. I hope I don't make any spelling mistakes like these in my posts in 2019. This could make a humorous contest.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
    Thanks, Joy, for giving this a look.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill, I liked this. Yeah well. Never underestimate your self. And you're certainly not shy. Great wee poem where all seems to go. I've run out of words and not allowed to send this before now. Sorry! Ulla:))

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
    Here?s what I do:

    Back again to right;
    hope i spell all the words write.
    Pol?jize in advance.

    This 5-7-5, A Poem, has the correct formatting and brings the mission of writing and reading into the new year with hope and determination.

    Sometimes I will simply fill a line with periods to satisfy the character requirement...................

reply by Ulla on 02-Jan-2019
    It does, I agree. LOL!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Haha, this is funny. On FS anything now counts as a poem. I enjoyed reading this. Your word choices are unique. I know you did all of this intentionally. But if not, some would lower the rating and tell you some unkind advice. Thanks for the laugh. Jan

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
    Thanks, Jan. I am often misunderstood.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Gee, you have made effective use of all your syllables in this creative
5-7-5. You have made the point that blatant errors can be creative.
LOL! Cute, humorous

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
    Thanks, Janice
Comment from Miss Sherry
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LOL...there, I did initials! You are a funny man, and very clever. More work goes into these ditties than shaving some kitties... Hope the new year is filled with your charming writes and wrongs!

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
    Thanks, OP. I?m expecting a great year for everyone.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Starting the New Year off in true Schott Form, I see....welk, I do think many of us would few just a tinge of loss of we didn't have our 'Bill of Wrirs Smile Infusion'! :) Thanx for the intentional 'write mixup', and ya just gotta love that 'pollogee'! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
    Thank you, Yvette. Happy reading and writing. Bill
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A bit of self promoting never hurt anyone and you will soon be picked up for bad spelling Bill, just post on Fanstory! He he he, and then await the onslaught, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
    Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL, this is brilliant, Bill, I love how you have done this. Oh, there is a small spelling mistake, but too small to bother with!!! LOL. Well done, and I look forward to another year of your unique humour! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
    Thank you, Sandra. Happy day.