Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Melissa,

Great points made here in this poem. You're right, of course, and this is the perfect time of year to be opening those windows and looking out on the new ideas. Fun! Good luck!

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thank you, Robin, for the lovely review.

Melissa

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Brave souls with creative drive will open that window and look out. Then we need to pick up that pen. And we now have 365 days to do it! Fresh start.

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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thanks so much, June, for the lovely review.

Melissa

Comment from zanya

Exceptional

Yes and what an appropriate reflection for the start of a brand new year 2019-opening our minds and hearts to 'Fresh ideas '- and a great pic to illustrate

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Zanya, thank you for the great review and comments. Have a lovely 2019.

Melissa

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-A very nice image, Melissa.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like your topic of fresh ideas
and the alliteration in the first line.
-The second line is a good follow
up to the first, as we begin the
new year with our writing and
sharing ideas.
-Have a great 2019!

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 Comment Written 01-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2019

Thanks so much, Pam. I appreciate your thoughts and review.

Melissa

reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Jan-2019

You are welcome.