Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Well crafted story that defines what Christmas is all about. That most special of all days. What a present the world received on his birthday.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019

This is a wonderful review, I?m so glad you liked it. Gb

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Gudbjorg, A poem of Christmas joy. I like how you have recaptured the birth of Jesus. Your message is clear:

He came to earth to live and die
To help us do God's will.

(Amen. I bow my head in grace.)

Good rhyming within. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019

Thank you again for your review of my poems, it is really great to have you read them.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello gudbjorg, you wrote a beautiful little poem to share with us. I love the simplicity that shares the message of our Saviour to the world. I am glad you decided to post it for us to see and enjoy.

All the best,

Melissa

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018

Thank you so much for your very helpful review, it is great.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

This is a simple tale of Christ that should appeal to all ages. You tell of His birth in Bethlehem and quickly summarize what it continues to mean to all those who believe in Him. Nicely done in only two stanzas. Rod

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018

Thank you so much for your very helpful review, lovely really.