Comment from Liz O'Neill

Exceptional

My, this done so well, inspite of the restrictions and rules. I was reading the instructions. I thought I could do that, then it got more complicated with just one more aspect. That was when I realized I'd admire anyone who could pull this off. Not only did you follow the rules, it had substance along with flow and it also has a very good message to draw the reader in to invite them to reflect upon their attitudes and behaviors to determine: " Was there evidence of caring?" Well written. I'm voting for this one.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018

Thank you for for your insightful comments and most generous rating!

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Wow, I am reading so many heartfelt poems on this Christmas Day, including yours. I am glad that I visited FanStory today.

Your well-written poem captures the essence of Christmas, but we should think like this everyday.

Christmas should be everyday, and life would be beautiful as your poem.

Merry Christmas. I hope you are having a good one.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018

Thank you for dropping by to share your insights and encouraging comments.