Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Sally, OMG sweet girl...this was awesome....OTFLMBO you...I bet Boo ghost loves it...I know I do...soooooo very well thought of my sweet friend...and what a picture...EEEEKKKKKK...CSI agent Sally Law...and her partner...agent Boo ghost...LOL...an awesome story...and I love your poem you...what a talented writer you are...very well written you...you got my vote...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019

Is this not the silliest thing ever? So glad it tickled your funny bone. Boo and I had fun with this one. He was pleased to be the star of the show, yet again. I appreciate your support and your kind comments about my work. It means so much to me.
Love,
Sal :+)

reply by l.raven on 02-Jan-2019

well you are soooooo welcome Sal...always...and big smiles back at you...love you...xxoo

Comment from Teresa Alford

Excellent

Excellent. You talent at poetry is awesome. Great, great job. At one time I was an Intensive Probation Officer, so anything related will catch my interest. The way you were able to tell a story in the poems WOWS me. Happy writing.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018

Thank you so much, dear Teresa. I just started writing poetry this year when I won the Halloween Tanka Poetry contest. I about fell off my chair! My first poem of any style. Up until that time, I was strictly a short works writer. Boo ghost invited me into the contest via fan email. Now, I love poetry, and I am learning as I go. I appreciate you kind review and comments.
Sally

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This is a fun parody of the Night Before Christmas, The Crime Before Christmas. The the meter doesn't always match up, but the humor is abounding.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2018

Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. So glad you liked it. Boo and I had fun with it.
All my Christmas best,
Sal

Comment from djeckert

Excellent

A fine homage to Mr. Kuch's art. lol. It was well done and quite enjoyable to read. Is that artwork one of yours? Oh, I see the name on ot now. it works well with your write. God blesses.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018

Thank you so much for the excellent review. I?m glad you liked it. Dean and BOO invited me into this one. It was a lot of fun.
All my best and a blessed Christmas to you and yours,
Sally

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

They remember and make a plan for peace and humanity, before the Christmas, they will find the killer and bring justice to light; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018

Thank you so much for the insightful review and comments. Justice served anytime is always good. This was some in good fun, and I am glad you enjoyed it.
All my best at Christmas and always,
Sally

Comment from Jim Hirtle

Excellent

You did well taking an old standard and bringing it into a different world. I can only imagine the time you must have expended. I had hoped for an ending with the bad guy being captured, well maybe a sequel is in the making.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2018

Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. It was done in good fun and the skin and bones was done in about 15 minutes. BOO gave me his input and critiquing eye. He liked it so much. He howled with ghostly laughter. So glad you could join in the fun!
All my best,
Sally

Comment from M. R. Kelly

Excellent

Haha what a lovely contribution! It made me laugh and brought me joy. I like that you have remixed a classic jingle. Thanks for sharing! good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018

Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. If I made you laugh AND brought you joy, my work is complete! I had a lot of fun with it. Thanks for joining in!
All my best?
Sally

Comment from highlander104

Excellent

WOW! This is one fun Christmas mystery poem. I luv the take on "The Night Before Christmas". Have you considered that one of the reindeer did it?

Fun read.

Jean K.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018

Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments. I am so glad you enjoyed it. This is about as silly as it gets! Boo invited me into this contest?all in good fun.
All my best,
Sally

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This was very creative and entertaining. It was almost like an episode of NCIS or Bones. The poem rhymes, makes sense, and it made me smile. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018

Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments. I appreciate it so much! Boo invited me into this contest, all in good fun. I am glad you enjoyed this. If We made you smile, our work is done,
All my best,
Sal

Comment from BOO ghost

Exceptional

Oh--- what a cute and scary poem. And BOO ghost is a star. Thanks for your time writing this novelty, and I sincerely appreciate this honor.

Writing is suppose to be fun. Not intended for brutal competitions which changes friends to a nemesis.

Just write from the heart and your always a winner.

Good luck with BOO in this contest!

BOO!

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

My most appreciated review so far! Thank you so much, Boo! I had a blast writing this, and you as the star is sure to please. All done in good fun. I am not much of a horror writer, so I had to add some comedy to make this more interesting.
All my best,
Sal ;+)

reply by BOO ghost on 18-Dec-2018

Yep. I liked it. You're my number one fan! That is what Kathy Bates said in the movie, 'Misery.'

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2018

I didn?t see that movie but the title is telling. Please take that a sincere compliment from a fan friend. ;+)