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The White Pigeon

A Christmas poem

18 total reviews 
Comment from judiverse
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What a lovely thought. I was interested to read in your notes that seeing a white pigeon made you feel better. You describe the bird as a spiritual creature, angelic in form--excellent description. It is wonderful to think that a bird represents peace which we need at this time. judi

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
    I appreciate your thoughtful comments and your enjoyment of my words. Elaine
reply by judiverse on 16-Dec-2018
    You're welcome. My pleasure to read. judi
Comment from tbacha58
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Well, I have always referred to my writing as my escape from the stresses of life and you have certainly taken that to the next (and even the next!) level with this inspired and inspiring write -- thank you for sharing such a large part of your heart with all of us today!! Wonderful!! :) :) TERRY

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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What a very nicely done free verse. I love the description and the feeling you put into this little piece. They are the symbol of peace and that is the feeling I get watching these graceful creations of God

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Aussie
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A lovely poem about the white pidgeon. Perhaps it was the bird that alighted on Jesus when John baptised Him in the Jordan River. All animals and birds can take different forms, maybe he was the 'dove of peace,' bringing you peace. Happy Christmas my friend.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
    Thanks again for your generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from country ranch writer
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When you least expect it there is always something out there that can brighten your day that's for you and for you dear friend it was a white pigeon.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
    Thanks again for your generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from kahpot
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What beautiful looking bird and excellent poem seeing such Christmas spirit in this creature, it certainly looks like they would bring cheer and peace to those who observed them, very well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from meeshu
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I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and your "star" is proud to be a pigeon. her cousin the dove gets all the love. you are very gracious, Elaine.....................meeshu

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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Carolyn Reaves
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I think God likes to entertain us with his creativity sometimes. I liked your poem as it is very creative, too. I like the illustration you chose to add to your beautiful writing.

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 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
    Thanks for a great review. Elaine
reply by Carolyn Reaves on 17-Dec-2018
    You are most welcome.