Rhyming Acrostic
Here I go17 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Sounds like you muse is very amused being used for this one, nice work up for this one indeed. Good luck with all this fuss I will just keep on reviewing, hehe.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Sounds like you muse is very amused being used for this one, nice work up for this one indeed. Good luck with all this fuss I will just keep on reviewing, hehe.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thank you just a fun write this one
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is obviously very challenging and you accomplish a great deed. To loop, rhyme, and acrostic in one poem is quite a feat. You are very clever in your storyline which could go seemingly forever, but the last three lines are the cleverest of all. Ending with failing to your critic who surrenders to the poem which you have written. And then the kicker, ending with the acrostic title! Marvelous! I enjoyed this so much. Thanks for taking me on a wild ride inside your head.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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This is obviously very challenging and you accomplish a great deed. To loop, rhyme, and acrostic in one poem is quite a feat. You are very clever in your storyline which could go seemingly forever, but the last three lines are the cleverest of all. Ending with failing to your critic who surrenders to the poem which you have written. And then the kicker, ending with the acrostic title! Marvelous! I enjoyed this so much. Thanks for taking me on a wild ride inside your head.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much, mind can be a bit funny at times
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Yes, it can.
Jesse
Comment from susand3022
Okay, Kahopt... Isn't it enough to have to write a Rhyming Acrostic? I've never tried, I should say that I've never really had the time to sit down and try, I know it would take a while. (not like writing a regular poem which for me can take just a minute. I was on the phone with Ms. Snyder one night and she said... you're done already??? and but for a word change or two, yes, it was) But you!!! You go on and add a loop... "just for fun" lol I was shaking my head and wondering to myself if an Acrostic wouldn't be enough, then to make it rhyme, (well, I can make anything rhyme) but to loop it? Okay... call me completely and for certain impressed.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Okay, Kahopt... Isn't it enough to have to write a Rhyming Acrostic? I've never tried, I should say that I've never really had the time to sit down and try, I know it would take a while. (not like writing a regular poem which for me can take just a minute. I was on the phone with Ms. Snyder one night and she said... you're done already??? and but for a word change or two, yes, it was) But you!!! You go on and add a loop... "just for fun" lol I was shaking my head and wondering to myself if an Acrostic wouldn't be enough, then to make it rhyme, (well, I can make anything rhyme) but to loop it? Okay... call me completely and for certain impressed.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much, I often wonder how others go about writing, you sound like you to have fun, many, many thanks
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nice work, kahpot!
You've risen to the challenge quite admirably, me thinks.
I know that I prefer acrostic poetry that rhymes although I'm not sure it matters to most readers.
I enjoyed reading this.
Bravo!
~Dean
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Nice work, kahpot!
You've risen to the challenge quite admirably, me thinks.
I know that I prefer acrostic poetry that rhymes although I'm not sure it matters to most readers.
I enjoyed reading this.
Bravo!
~Dean
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much, it was fun trying this one
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UR very welcome.
~Dean
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hey there, my friend, you did a fantastic job on this not just rhyming Acrostic, but a loop. Wonderfully done. That's a pretty cool picture to pair with it. Happy Holidays!
~Kerry
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Hey there, my friend, you did a fantastic job on this not just rhyming Acrostic, but a loop. Wonderfully done. That's a pretty cool picture to pair with it. Happy Holidays!
~Kerry
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much, I had fun with this one****kahpot
Comment from meeshu
WOW. I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and your grasp of the rhyming Acrostic is astonishing, really. can't be the first, Kahpot..............meeshu
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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WOW. I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and your grasp of the rhyming Acrostic is astonishing, really. can't be the first, Kahpot..............meeshu
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much, it was fun****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are doing a great job challenging yourself with new forms or ways to present said forms, kahpot. I enjoyed reading this one. There is good flow, a great message, and some great rhymes. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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You are doing a great job challenging yourself with new forms or ways to present said forms, kahpot. I enjoyed reading this one. There is good flow, a great message, and some great rhymes. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much, I have good teachers****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a three-for. A poem that would be a good submission in two contest categories is a two-for. This is the first three-for I've seen, a poem that could be entered in three categories.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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This is a three-for. A poem that would be a good submission in two contest categories is a two-for. This is the first three-for I've seen, a poem that could be entered in three categories.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thank you, I had fun compiling this one****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
You always do a superb job in these poems that are more like a word puzzle to write. I like that you write the whole process so well. The first 8 lines are rhymed nicely and so are the last three. Lines 9-12 are odd end rhymes but perhaps you pronounce 'redeem, onslaught, support and top' differently from me.
One apostrophe comment:
"Afloat but drifting from minds doubtfull cloak" (mind's) I assume that the two l's in doubtful is due to British spelling.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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You always do a superb job in these poems that are more like a word puzzle to write. I like that you write the whole process so well. The first 8 lines are rhymed nicely and so are the last three. Lines 9-12 are odd end rhymes but perhaps you pronounce 'redeem, onslaught, support and top' differently from me.
One apostrophe comment:
"Afloat but drifting from minds doubtfull cloak" (mind's) I assume that the two l's in doubtful is due to British spelling.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much, I will correct mind's and check out thr rhyme suggestion****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
WOW! A rhyming acrostic loop poem! This is very creative
in form and conveyance of a theme relevant to all who write--
keeping our desire to write active and our poems saying
what we want them to say.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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WOW! A rhyming acrostic loop poem! This is very creative
in form and conveyance of a theme relevant to all who write--
keeping our desire to write active and our poems saying
what we want them to say.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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Thank you very much, I had fun trying this one****kahpot
