Gracefully In Style
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about a very clever mouse that bypass the mouse trap in a very genius way that we sometimes see happpening on movies when the hero hangs from the roof to steal the treasure.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about a very clever mouse that bypass the mouse trap in a very genius way that we sometimes see happpening on movies when the hero hangs from the roof to steal the treasure.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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thank you
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, donette. I was laughing hysterically at your photo so hard, I had to wait a minute to type. I wish I had thought of that for one of my paintings. Good luck in the contest. Very well written. Gets six stars from me. Thank you for sharing
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Hi, donette. I was laughing hysterically at your photo so hard, I had to wait a minute to type. I wish I had thought of that for one of my paintings. Good luck in the contest. Very well written. Gets six stars from me. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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wow all those stars!!! lol i am so happy you enjoyd my silly poem
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Very creative and amusing.... My favourite is the first line.. mice can be graceful if we looked at them without repulsion. The art work is a "star".
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Very creative and amusing.... My favourite is the first line.. mice can be graceful if we looked at them without repulsion. The art work is a "star".
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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thank you so very much
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Donette, such a gorgeous image for your poem, it fits so well. I found the poem a very strong entry for the 5-7-5 competition. It has great word choices that made the poem an excellent read. Very entertaining and thanks for sharing it, cheers, Anastasia.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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Hello Donette, such a gorgeous image for your poem, it fits so well. I found the poem a very strong entry for the 5-7-5 competition. It has great word choices that made the poem an excellent read. Very entertaining and thanks for sharing it, cheers, Anastasia.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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thank you kindly
Comment from Sally Law
My gosh, how cute is this! This is so adorably funny! Where did you get the photo art? I am amazed how talented you are. My best to you and yours and in the contest!
Sally
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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My gosh, how cute is this! This is so adorably funny! Where did you get the photo art? I am amazed how talented you are. My best to you and yours and in the contest!
Sally
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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thank you, Sally, i get my photos on Pinterest what a compliment coming from you, you are an amazing writer
Comment from country ranch writer
OH, THIS IS SO DARN CUTE AND IT IS A GREAT WORK UP FOR THIS POEM GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST. HE LOOKS LIKE HE IS FLYING IN TO GRAB A BITE.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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OH, THIS IS SO DARN CUTE AND IT IS A GREAT WORK UP FOR THIS POEM GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST. HE LOOKS LIKE HE IS FLYING IN TO GRAB A BITE.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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thank you so very much im so happy you enjoyed this
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! :) Look at that poor little guy...he's probably wondering what in the heck is going on!! ;) :) A very fun little 5-7-5 offering for the contest, ma'am -- well done! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) :) Yvette
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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LOL! :) Look at that poor little guy...he's probably wondering what in the heck is going on!! ;) :) A very fun little 5-7-5 offering for the contest, ma'am -- well done! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) :) Yvette
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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thank you i am so happy you enjoyed this
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello, Donette, This verse is so cute and is wonderfully accompanied by a hilarious photograph. Clever writing will carry this one far. I wish you all the best inthe 5-7-5 contest.
Melissa
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Hello, Donette, This verse is so cute and is wonderfully accompanied by a hilarious photograph. Clever writing will carry this one far. I wish you all the best inthe 5-7-5 contest.
Melissa
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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thank you so very much