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I'm a writer

Love to make up stories just for my own entertainment

8 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 and a very positive attitude of a writer who claims to have many stories in her head it is just a matter to write them down and print them for others to read.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Many thanks Sandra.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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This poem gave me pause. I love to read these short entries to see what they can say in 17 syllables.

Your title got my attention, then I will be thinking about your words all day. You see, I love reading. The writing that I do is really just a sort of payback from my hours of pleasure reading. I have no stories in my head. I have the ability to write an excellent book, but no story in my head.

I am so envious of you. I can't even imagine entertaining myself with my imagination. I've heard J. K. Rowling say that she had the entire Harry Potter series in her head before she wrote it. As your title says, you and the J. K. Rowling types are the true writer. Your imagination feeds you while mine is hungry.

Your poem confirms that I will never run out of reading material. There are writers out there.

Good job and good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Many thanks for your great review, Debbie
Comment from Ms. Snyder
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Hi Jen, (anonymous) reviewing from your page...
No you are not alone, I do exactly the same thing. I am an only child - not sure if you are, but that is what I have done from a very young age as means to amuse myself. I also can build a character based off of a concept - maybe one of these days when there is a partner writing competition if you want to team up - you might be a good person to possibly story board with - I don't know just throwing it out there. I really like this entry for the 5-7-5 contest. And the only reason I know it is yours is: you were giving me a review and I went to your profile. I can't even remember if I am entered or not. I did so many so soon - that I can't keep them all straight. But I am wishing you luck in the competition regardless if I am competing against you or not. I truly love this forum and all the people I have slowly had the opportunity to meet. I love to read as well and that is why before I reply to your review I am reviewing your poem. Cheers, Fonda

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Hi. Fonda
    I really appreciate that you took the time to write such a long and detailed review, probably the longest one that I have ever received. Thank you so much. I was not an only child, I have a younger brother but spent a lot of time on my own as a kid. I don't know whether that is the reason for continually daydreaming or whatever you want to call it but sometimes I fInd it hard to decipher which is reality. I love these writing prompts and I love open mikes as my favourite writing genre is comedy. I have never heard of story board, perhaps an American term. Thanks again and take care. Jen. X
Comment from Sugarray77
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This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest. I like your evaluation of your own interests. I, too, like to imagine stories and how they would flow. I use a lot of those imaginings in my poetry too. Great job and good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Many thanks Melissa.
Comment from donette1914
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this is so creative
very well done and putting words so believable and
you put so much work into this fine piece and it shows
i hope for the best in the contest
very nice photo
donette1914 dec 5 2018

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Many thanks Donette.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-An interesting topic choice.
-It's good that you use your
imagination and make up stories.
-No, you are not a freak, from
what I can gather.
-I am glad you put the note
about liking to read, though.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    Many thanks
reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Dec-2018
    You are welcome.
Comment from N. Genie
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I am a hundred percent with you. Many times at night I can't even sleep because a story is playing actively in my head. I understand what you mean, we still read... but because we make up our own stories sometimes we may even not be satisfied and modify the story ourselves. Its a curse and a gift really, as for me, if I don't write an idea down immediately, its gone as quickly as it came, and I tend to have my head in the clouds 90% of the time.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    Many thanks. My feelings exactly.
Comment from Pantygynt
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Yes I think I can. But surely the stories you end up writing - you say you are a writer - all started privately inside your head. If I can keep myself awake with my thoughts then they are probably worth sharing. If I bore myself to sleep then I had better forget that one.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    Thanks, point taken. I have written for a job most of my life but now it is just a hobby so I can't be bothered writing a lot of things down, mainly just short poems.