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Melting Moments

Cookie entry 20 syllables

12 total reviews 
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Good memories of when I was a little boy eating my Mom's raw cookie or cake batter from the beaters or with a spatula. Apparently, this practice never affected my health.

It is too bad you did not have/find an image with 20 cookies (-; However, all of your 16 I have sampled with a glass of cold milk or a cup of hot tea (-;

Good luck with your 'Cookie Celebration - melting moments' entry.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Hi Mark, Thank you for sharing a cookie/ bickie with me and yes I can remeber the beaters too yum. Raw bickie is just as good as cooked bicki LOL Cheers for your good luck message
Comment from Sugarray77
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How cute is this?! I love your colorful presentation and your verse too. Including a different font and word for cookie keeps this interesting and fun. Well done.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Hi Sugarray77 Thanks for ypur review for my Cookie presentation A bit of fun to do it differently Cheers
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Such a joy-filled delicious poem celebrating COOKIES! GAWD! Who doesn't love cookies? I had to laugh when I read your line about the "bickie." My family doesn't have terms of endearment for cookies, but we call doughnuts, "doughnies." Yup.
College-educated, business owners, professionals, and we call doughnuts, "doughnies." Don't tell anyone. Our secret...okay?

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Hi Diane, Thanks for your review I hadnt heard of Cookies until Sesamie Street and Cookie Monster LOL we call then Bickies (biscuits the correct term). Never hear doughnuts referred to as doughies either Ha Ha no just doughnuts here . Mums the words Cheers for your best wishes MO
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a fun and delicious rhyming offering -- love the fact that you could fit so many in there -- great job! ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls!! :)

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Hi Y M Rogers. Thank for your review and one must be in it to win it Cookie time LOL We call them bickie where I live didnt know about Cokkies until Sesamie Street Ha Ha Cheers
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written twenty syllable poem in celebration of the cookie celebration. The Christmas cookie is some of the most popular cookies of the year when it is melting in our mouths.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
    Hi Sandra, Thank you and I thought I would add my bickie into the mix I had not heard of Cookies before the Cookie amonster in Seseme Street Cheers
Comment from BeasPeas
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Oh I definitely agree, cookies are the best, especially the fancy ones with icing. I've never heard them called "bickie" but who cares. Good entry. I'm sure they taste good with any name. Yummy in the tummy. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    Hi Marilyn Yes nothing like a good cookie. We call them bickies always have A bit of functo celebrate yet another day Cookie day Ya Cheers
Comment from jmshumate
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This a cute poem, and a good contest entry. Whether you call it cookie or bickie doesn't really matter, they still taste the same, and are "yummy in my tummy" good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    Hi jmshumate, Thanks for your review Couldnt resist a yummy cookie/ bickie so thought ai would celebrate also Cheers
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks how yummy, munchy, crunchy and enjoying it is to treat and eat cookies on the National Cookie Day; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
    Hi DR ALCREATOR, Thank you for your review and for having a bikie with me Happy National Cookie Day Cheers
Comment from kahpot
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What a beautiful presentation of this short poem, the artwork is good enough to eat and I can imagine them in my tummy, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
    Hi kahpot, We must be crossing wires LOL glad you could stop in for a cookie/ bickie cheers for your best wishes
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
    Hi kahpot, We must be crossing wires LOL glad you could stop in for a cookie/ bickie cheers for your best wishes
Comment from LIJ Red
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Yep, I say cookie. And you sign off cheers. Kangaroos or Kiwis peeping over yer shoulder? Hey, you said cokkie in the subtitle... Well, I love 'em. Here's five stars for sparking my appetite.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
    Hi LIJ Red Thanks for sharing my cookie/bickie with me Have fixed the cokkie LOL (yes we have them too but not too eat )Cheers