I like the rhyme in this,
and the way it talks about the possibility of miracles, as long as you believe enough.
I'm glad that a recovery was achieved in the end,
and yeah, never forgotten!
keep on the good writing!
My Dieabetic Kidneys failed and my BP sailed, -edit suggestion
My diabetic kidneys failed and my BP sailed
Left hand amputated, right fingers went(,) too,- edit suggestion
Interesting take on the prompt, dear writer. Is this biographical? If so, how very powerfully driven this piece is. I made some edit suggestions, but this poem reads very well of a life saved by HE who grants us breath... Yes, it is HIS grace that sets us free. Good luck in the contest.